Mmmmmm Chocolate

I have a nice sister named Sandy.
Who always has a dish of candy.
Sweet chocolate bits.
To satisfy fits.
To this chocoholic, she's dandy.

Note: Thanks to Robert Pettit for his comment, I changed it to chocoholic from sugarholic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:12 PM
hahaha. yes I DO have a sense of humor. I see you put up a bunch more limericks. could you tell me the one for my contest so I won't view it yet? Or let me know if these recent three limericks are all ones I can see right away!
Pettit Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 11:36 PM
A person addicted to chocolate is a "chocoholic". Good write that can make almost any reader begin to crave the stuff.
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Yeah, but it seemed so passe and surar seemed to sound better to me. :/ :) Now go enjoy some and have a nice day. Peace. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 12:21 AM
a cute one, Robert. Only line two was slightly off on meter. The others were great!!
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Line two was slightly off? What the #@&%^$#@!(%$^ you talkin' 'bout. :):):):) hehehehe :):):) Couldn't resist that. That smile on your face, I hope is real. You look like you have a sense of humor. :) Peace. :) My gooood friend. :)
A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 6:16 PM
mmm I love chocolate, a nice sweet poem, for this Sandy, who rhymes with candy... *Have a nice day* Love ~SKAT~
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Hello Skat. Can't beat a good piece of Dove or gheridali , or however you spell that. You have a nice evening. Peace. :)
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 3:21 PM
LOL, had a chuckle here : )
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 2:59 PM
This one speaks to many of us with a sweet tooth..Excellent Robert
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 9:09 PM
sorry Robert,,lol
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Thanks Tom. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace