Mixed Up Day

It’s a mixed up day
Nature wants to play
White snow with brown leaves
Blowing in the sunny breeze

Pinecones flattened on the road
In the arctic air, so cold
A white curtain at the mountain veils
Snow squalls fill the sky in trails

It’s a mixed up beautiful day
Nature wants to play
I watch in wonder
If next, will be thunder

For now it is a winter’s blast
Coming in real fast
Leaving fall quickly in the past
While the sun still lasts
	
Heidi Sands

11/10/17

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Date: 11/19/2017 5:05:00 PM
Lovely poem, Heidi. Winter is fast approaching. I wish it would snow this year.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Klio. I hope your wishes come true for you :)
Date: 11/11/2017 2:49:00 PM
In the twenties waiting for the snow, good write brings good memories. Blessings
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:51:00 PM
Hi Pete. I am happy it brings good memories. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 11/10/2017 12:02:00 PM
Delightfully playful poem, Heidi. Nature in all of its splendor causes us to be left in awe. Each day a new wonder to behold. Excellent write, my dear friend. Love and peace always.
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Date: 11/10/2017 12:14:00 PM
Yes, it is amazing to see, Freddie. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 11/10/2017 11:09:00 AM
The mixed up day feels quite scenic--winter is on the way--enjoy the day, Heidi!
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:12:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Yes, very scenic. A lot to see today. Thank you. Have a nice day :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:45:00 AM
Cold has descended here as well...I'm sure the snow isn't that far behind... lovely poem
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:00:00 AM
Yes, you are right Tim. It's on the way. Thank you :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:36:00 AM
It's sunny bright and beautiful here with a temperature of 58 degrees. We don't get much winter or snow in the South. I miss only the first snow from when I lived in Colorado, where the weather is often mixed up in one day! thanks for reminding me, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2017 9:39:00 AM
It sounds very nice where you are Lin. Thanks for your visit :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:10:00 AM
Saved as a fave! Just so briskly beautiful!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim :)
Date: 11/10/2017 9:10:00 AM
The sun isn't very powerful today is it Heidi? These last days of Autumn do bring with it cold blasts and sometimes a good snow! I'm glad cause I like snow...as long as it doesn't impede my driving! The beauty that you speak of is incredible, I love days like that! Such a beautiful description you gave of nature and all its wonderment! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Russell. The sun is bright today, but everything is going on at once, creating a mixture of beauty. :)
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