Mixed Emotions

Jerry's task, to 'Write a merry jingle'
Something to make toes and fingers jingle
   He wrote of how his fat wife
   Had been happy all her life
Won the contest, but now he is single
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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James Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 3:18 AM
Some are happy in their skin many are not, maybe be didnt know her as well as he thought, Emilia : )
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 5:50 PM
Ha, ha! Apparently not, Emilia. And he needs to get his 'sensitivity apparatus' tuned! :) gw
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Ha!! Ha!! Well, sometimes women who are obese seem happy on the outside but are dying on the inside. I like the limerick though. As always what appears to be is not necessarily what is. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Well, we men who are obese, or getting close, are dying inside too. It's no fun, I can assure you. Thank you for your support, Sara! :) gw
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 7:42 PM
lol... cute limerick... perhaps he should have found another subject to write on! maybe he'd still be married!
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 5:59 PM
You'd think... Old Jerry sure didn't think before he wrote, eh?! Cheers, then Tears, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Very cute, Gershon ~
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Appreciate your visit, Line. Always happy to see your avatar! Humor and Hilarity, Gershon
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