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Mixed Emotions

Jerry's task, to 'Write a merry jingle' Something to make toes and fingers jingle He wrote of how his fat wife Had been happy all her life Won the contest, but now he is single

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Emilia James

Date: 11/28/2020 3:18:00 AM

Some are happy in their skin many are not, maybe be didnt know her as well as he thought, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/28/2020 5:50:00 PM

Ha, ha! Apparently not, Emilia. And he needs to get his 'sensitivity apparatus' tuned! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2020 5:59:00 AM

Ha!! Ha!! Well, sometimes women who are obese seem happy on the outside but are dying on the inside. I like the limerick though. As always what appears to be is not necessarily what is. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2020 5:59:00 PM

Well, we men who are obese, or getting close, are dying inside too. It's no fun, I can assure you. Thank you for your support, Sara! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/24/2020 7:42:00 PM

lol... cute limerick... perhaps he should have found another subject to write on! maybe he'd still be married!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2020 5:59:00 PM

You'd think... Old Jerry sure didn't think before he wrote, eh?! Cheers, then Tears, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/24/2020 7:31:00 PM

Very cute, Gershon ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2020 6:01:00 PM

Appreciate your visit, Line. Always happy to see your avatar! Humor and Hilarity, Gershon