Mitt's Lament

The oven timer’s going off. Oh crap!
Before that, I was lying in the drawer
enjoying a peaceful  little nap.
“She” grabs me and goes to the oven door.
I’m held by her left hand, while in her right,
my brother Terry – poor guy – she has got!
Beneath our padding, we’re both filled with fright.
She has not got a clue how that dang pot
feels torturous against our faded skin.
Our flesh, once bright red cloth, has grown so worn.
Abusing us for all these years – a sin
it ought to be! My brother’s getting torn
from all our washings. God, I feel so lost.
What happens once into the trash we’re tossed?


Writtenh May 12, 2020 
N/A in Potholder Contest judged 5/18/2020
Now used for John Hamilton's N-A Re-Run 8 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Great personification in this whimsical and fun write. Terry and Mitt, the OveGlove twins, such fun in your pen. I hope this does well in the potholder contest. I wonder how many people are going to write about holding "pot", haha! ~ John
Hamilton Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Funny I thought this was about Romney, you know Mitt kinda confusing but a cute write nonetheless!
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 9:43 PM
I read this just now. It explains the emotions of a potholder so vividly. "Beneath our padding, we’re both filled with fright"...that fear. This is lovely and creative. :)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:45 PM
This is such a awesome write. I truly love it~!!!! It's a sure winner. Love and prayers always, Gina
May Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Mitt's always feeling the heat. Nicely done Andrea, best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 11:44 PM
haha. Did you catch the name of my other potholder, Terry (for terry cloth?)
Laurie Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Hello Andrea … nice witty sonnet indeed Andrea. If our kitchen utensils could think, I'm certain this sonnet speaks for them all - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:13 PM
Misleading title; I thought you were writing about Romney's pot .....Aloha! Rico
Peranteau Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 6:20 PM
So, lol, we may be hovering beneath the same stars Andrea....just this morning I pledge to treat my precious brass hook in my kitchen with a handsome set of stove mitts before weeks end...awesome write dear poet...have a wonderful week...much live, james
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Poor mitt, ours is well scorched, at least nobody got burnt lol. Good luck Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:01 PM
I enjoyed your personification poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Love your interpretation! Frightened, tortured and tossed!
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