Misty Rain

M	oving steadily like bands of ghosts
I	ndifferent to the weakened rays of the sun
S	oft as rose petals falling on my skin
T	ickling, playfully teasing, fantasy
Y	ielding air as fresh as morning dew

R	endering these quiet moments for introspection	
A	s earth tone colored leaves dance in mid air
I	vites me for a quick walk through the park
N	o other season like autumn does it for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 17, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Images of the Fall Audrey, beautiful poetry > have a lovely Sunday >> James
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October 10, 2010 at 7:20 AM
In the greatest introspection, we are moved of the Spirit in different ways. Love your Acrostic. Agape, Moses
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October 10, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Hi Audrey.Very skilful and at the same time lovely imagery.This was so nice to read,soft and gentle and relaxing to the mind.I find you inspiring thank you.Also if I have not already done so thank your comments to me on my own work. luv June(Sylvia)
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October 7, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Audrey your visuals are just amazing in this write. I love it. Thanks for your comment on "mended heart" mine is still a work in progress as well. Love Wilma
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October 7, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Audrey. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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