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Misty Night

The autumn leaves scattered along the road
Draw the eyes to a misty foggy night
Blurred in the shadows a scary abode
Too misty for travellers in the night 
Before the daybreak when the mist explodes
Just when thickness surrounds wrapping so tight
There comes forth a gallant horseman to lead
Mortality freed, immortality concede 

Finis'
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Through The Mist
Poet: Sara Kendrick
August 24,2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/25/2014 6:11:00 AM
Excellent. Waiting for the finish. All the best. Taf
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Date: 8/24/2014 5:44:00 PM
Wow. this is so artful and poetic. you have such agreat talent. I feel very inspired by your words. poetry at it's best. rsally enjoyed it hope you win you should Pete.
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:33:00 AM
please send it to me when it's finished
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:32:00 AM
It reads like it will be a really good one, Sara - love it so far
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Date: 8/24/2014 10:51:00 AM
Half way is so beautiful Sara! What when u finish it,, going to be lethal my friend,, can't wait any more ,, pls ,, good luck!
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Date: 8/24/2014 10:03:00 AM
Waiting for the finish, Sara.... You have us wondering...Hugs
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:44:00 AM
great start Sara:-) hugs jan xx
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