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Misty Mountain:

In the mountain mist

Lurks the wisdom of the past

Forever dwelling.

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Line Gauthier

October 26, 2018 at 11:31 PM

Powerful imagery of tangible timelessness. Beautiful, White Wolf.

Harshita Chaudhary

October 17, 2017 at 11:03 PM

Beautiful. Your haiku touched my heart and filled it with beauty.

John Herlihy

April 30, 2017 at 5:37 AM

Ya, this works well. If wisdom doesn't lurk in mountains, then it doesn't lurk anywhere. John

Andrea Dietrich

April 28, 2017 at 8:17 PM

This is awesome. Love that last line. Well, ALL of it!!

Tim Smith

April 28, 2017 at 5:33 PM

Excellent musings

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 6:35 PM

Thank you, Tim, enjoy your day /|\

Agnes Krampe

April 28, 2017 at 5:08 PM

you captured some of a mountain's magic in your haiku.

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 6:35 PM

Thank you very much, Agnes /|\

Barbara Campbell

April 28, 2017 at 3:38 PM

Love this!

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 6:33 PM

Thank you very much /|\

Darren White

April 28, 2017 at 1:50 PM

Beautiful haiku Budgie, you're becoming a master :)

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 6:33 PM

Thanks a bunch, Duir /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 28, 2017 at 7:41 AM

Divine Haiku dear, WW! Sheer magic your picture! A 7++++

White Wolf

April 28, 2017 at 7:48 AM

Yes, it suits the poem well I believe! Thank you for your kind review, Demetrios! Let's start a new craze, hey, I'll give you a 7+ for your comment, Haha, all the best /|\