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Misty Mornings

Misty mornings as gray as matter of invisible time A porch light is lit but there is no one home Fogged up windows and street lamp tenors a white wash sky achieves light as a shutter opens the mind is restored, it is no longer night.

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/22/2024 2:03:00 PM

Very nice, Vie. Simply beautiful. Can almost see that shutter opening! Hope all is well... Charlie :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/22/2024 7:06:00 PM

thank you for stopping by Charles

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/18/2024 11:29:00 AM

just beautiful, like a scenery , every image is moving, this is how mornings should be, thanks poet Rose for the delicious poetry

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/18/2024 3:21:00 PM

Thank you so much for leaving a comment Yann,

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/17/2024 8:18:00 AM

I think you and I have entered into some fog. I must search for you. HUgs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/18/2024 3:21:00 PM

Yes Victor sometimes I believe we are in a fog, sometimes we come out of it, and shine !

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/16/2024 11:21:00 AM

Night often not specific time nor place -- more a state of being. Thoughtful work. Got me thinking deep.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/18/2024 3:20:00 PM

I love the way you delve into my poems and make them shine,

Michael Tor

Date: 11/16/2024 4:24:00 AM

This is so wonderful to read Vie. Darkness has a gloomy affect on the soul but light has the opposite, well said and written. This one is a favor. Missed your Poetry. Hugs...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/18/2024 3:20:00 PM

Its a pleasure to read a comment from you Michael,