Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Misty Mornings

Misty mornings
 as gray as matter of invisible time 
A porch light is lit but there is no one home 
Fogged up windows and street lamp tenors   
a white wash sky achieves light    
as a shutter opens the mind is restored,    
it is no longer night.

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Charles Messina November 22, 2024 at 2:03 PM Very nice, Vie. Simply beautiful. Can almost see that shutter opening! Hope all is well... Charlie :) Mystic Rose Rose November 22, 2024 at 7:06 PM thank you for stopping by Charles

Yann Rolland November 18, 2024 at 11:29 AM just beautiful, like a scenery , every image is moving, this is how mornings should be, thanks poet Rose for the delicious poetry Mystic Rose Rose November 18, 2024 at 3:21 PM Thank you so much for leaving a comment Yann,

Victor Buhagiar November 17, 2024 at 8:18 AM I think you and I have entered into some fog. I must search for you. HUgs. Mystic Rose Rose November 18, 2024 at 3:21 PM Yes Victor sometimes I believe we are in a fog, sometimes we come out of it, and shine !

Joseph P. DiMino November 16, 2024 at 11:21 AM Night often not specific time nor place -- more a state of being. Thoughtful work. Got me thinking deep. Mystic Rose Rose November 18, 2024 at 3:20 PM I love the way you delve into my poems and make them shine,

Michael Tor November 16, 2024 at 4:24 AM This is so wonderful to read Vie. Darkness has a gloomy affect on the soul but light has the opposite, well said and written. This one is a favor. Missed your Poetry. Hugs... Mystic Rose Rose November 18, 2024 at 3:20 PM Its a pleasure to read a comment from you Michael,

Jay Narain November 15, 2024 at 11:43 AM A poem with beautiful imagery. I loved it. Mystic Rose Rose November 15, 2024 at 6:26 PM Thanks Jay for stopping by :)

Silent One November 15, 2024 at 9:36 AM Reminds me of an English morning in Autumn.. I wrote the word mist in my poem today also.. Always a pleasure to read you.. Mystic Rose Rose November 15, 2024 at 6:27 PM Must go read your poem then S, its always a treat to read you

Anitha Jayasankar November 15, 2024 at 6:49 AM Beautiful imagery of the misty morning you created with your words dear Vie. Hugs... ~ Ani Mystic Rose Rose November 15, 2024 at 6:27 PM Thanks dear Anitha for commenting, keep well :)