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June 9, 2023
~1st Place (shared)~ Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Dilly Dally



   Graphic design by Mark Toney using Canva Pro

 

June 9, 2023

Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Dilly Dally
First Place - Shared with Ann Peck, John Lawless, and Lin Lane

 

Misty Morning Fog

Misty Morning Fog

dawn's bitter echo
weeping willow’s silent wail ...
misting eyes beseech

painful memories
I should have begged her to stay ...
mourning most mornings
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/12/2023 10:04:00 AM
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Congratulations on your winning Haiku, Mark. It's very well expressed. Others should claim its value.
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/12/2023 2:41:00 PM
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I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, Lin. Congratulations on the enchantment and wonder displayed in your winning haiku "diamonds strung on shrubs."
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