Home » Poems » Mark Toney » Misty Morning Fog

Poet Haiku

Notes About The Poem

June 9, 2023
~1st Place (shared)~ Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Dilly Dally

Graphic design by Mark Toney using Canva Pro

June 9, 2023

Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Dilly Dally
First Place - Shared with Ann Peck, John Lawless, and Lin Lane

Misty Morning Fog

Misty Morning Fog

dawn's bitter echo
weeping willow’s silent wail ...
misting eyes beseech

painful memories
I should have begged her to stay ...
mourning most mornings

heartbreaklost loverelationshiphaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lin Lane

June 12, 2023 at 10:04 AM

Congratulations on your winning Haiku, Mark. It's very well expressed. Others should claim its value.

Mark Toney

June 12, 2023 at 2:41 PM

I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, Lin. Congratulations on the enchantment and wonder displayed in your winning haiku "diamonds strung on shrubs."

Misty Morning Fog

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources