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Misty Falls

misty falls


suns light

your body shakes and quivers to the cold breeze

your heart is at ease

to hold your warm body in the suns light makes my heart come alight

no more darkened thought

no more pain

no more strain

the suns light moves the misty nights falls

standing at the windows light we will never fight

see we are holding on for each and every beautiful night
and then back to that sweet sunlight


ceizar words for you to hold on to for the rest of your life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/27/2010 7:35:00 AM
You are quite a romantic Duncan.. Enjoyed this ;-)
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Date: 11/23/2010 3:10:00 PM
sweet romantic words in this poem duncan...and thank you for your kind words on my poetry...
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:01:00 PM
Super romantic piece Duncan.. such an elegant read luv.. enjoyed your creative words this happy Sunday.. and a Happy Thanksgiving to u too..
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:23:00 AM
the lightness of sensuality sprakles in this well- wrutten piece, duncan... breathless! warmest, nette
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