David Crandall Poet Free verse

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7/5/2025 for SOME KIND OF MISTY Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Misty Childhood Vision

By calm childhood's brook, 
shafts of brash, slanting light  
shone through a dewy mist. 
From a stone, there I spied,
descending from a thread, 
dawn's angel from the dark.

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Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2025 at 12:08 PM Nice and mysterious. Congrats on the win David Crandall July 12, 2025 at 3:23 PM Thanks Andrea!

Jay Narain July 11, 2025 at 10:19 AM Nice one. David Crandall July 12, 2025 at 3:22 PM Thanks Jay!

Terry Miller July 11, 2025 at 7:24 AM Love this David, congratulations David Crandall July 12, 2025 at 3:21 PM Thanks Kim!

Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2025 at 6:59 AM Curious and ethereal write! Congrats! David Crandall July 12, 2025 at 3:21 PM Thanks Kim!

Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2025 at 10:59 AM I enjoyed reading your "Misty Childhood Vision" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away...... David Crandall July 5, 2025 at 3:10 PM Thanks Paula!