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7/5/2025 for SOME KIND OF MISTY Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

By calm childhood's brook, shafts of brash, slanting light shone through a dewy mist. From a stone, there I spied, descending from a thread, dawn's angel from the dark.

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Date: 7/11/2025 12:08:00 PM
Nice and mysterious. Congrats on the win
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David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2025 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 7/11/2025 10:19:00 AM
Nice one.
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David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2025 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Jay!
Date: 7/11/2025 7:24:00 AM
Love this David, congratulations
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David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2025 3:21:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 7/11/2025 6:59:00 AM
Curious and ethereal write! Congrats!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/12/2025 3:21:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 7/5/2025 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Misty Childhood Vision" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away......
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David Crandall
Date: 7/5/2025 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Paula!

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