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Misty Autumn Morn

Through morning moisture The mist reveals the changing Green life to ochres http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2010 2:55:00 PM

This one is an excellent descriptive write in such few words..I can just picture this scene..The choice of ochres is a great one..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/4/2010 2:40:00 PM

Love the image you conjured up with this piece James :) btw was a bit apprehensive about adding "hot summer's night" now I'm glad I did, you made me laugh with your comment, thanks again ~ tc Wilma

James Peranteau

Date: 7/4/2010 2:36:00 PM

I think I know a painting (1870'something) that's cleverly to this write Mr. Fraser ! Awesome write Sir ! james

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/4/2010 1:38:00 PM

Lovely haiku that takes me to a different place than this hot summer 4th of July!! Mmmmm nice one!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 1:37:00 PM

Very visual James and a nice spin on Haiku .. enjoyed with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 1:10:00 PM

What a terrific image you give us -- the transition from shades of gray in the mist to the vivid color of daylight. Ochre is not my favorite food, but this is now one of my favorite poems. Excellent, James! Love, Carolyn