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Misty Autumn Morn

Through morning moisture The mist reveals the changing Green life to ochres http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Date: 7/4/2010 2:55:00 PM
This one is an excellent descriptive write in such few words..I can just picture this scene..The choice of ochres is a great one..Sara
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:40:00 PM
Love the image you conjured up with this piece James :) btw was a bit apprehensive about adding "hot summer's night" now I'm glad I did, you made me laugh with your comment, thanks again ~ tc Wilma
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:38:00 PM
Lovely haiku that takes me to a different place than this hot summer 4th of July!! Mmmmm nice one!! :)
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:37:00 PM
Very visual James and a nice spin on Haiku .. enjoyed with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:10:00 PM
What a terrific image you give us -- the transition from shades of gray in the mist to the vivid color of daylight. Ochre is not my favorite food, but this is now one of my favorite poems. Excellent, James! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/4/2010 12:30:00 PM
This especially speaks of the many crests of the Blue Ridge. Lovely write..............Charles
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Date: 7/4/2010 11:09:00 AM
Perfect color scheme..love it. B G
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:58:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:27:00 AM
beautiful, serene poem
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:08:00 AM
Your haiku has a calm beauty James, a dreamlike visual quality. It creates a stunningly beautiful image in my mind. Love it ~ Sharon :)
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