Misty

I carried my umbrella but
Despite what I’d supposed,
It wasn’t raining hard enough
And so I kept it closed.

Some people had theirs open
But the lion’s share did not;
My coat remained unblemished
From a raindrop’s polka dot.

My glasses, though, were speckled with
Those droplets made of mist,
A trivial annoyance you
Might think should be dismissed.

Yet still, if on a misty day,
Until the weather passes,
You might unfurl that bumbershoot*
If you are wearing glasses.

*umbrella
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 4:01 PM
As long as it isn't too cold the mist feels so refreshing. Here now stands the challenge for you. You try rhyming that. Peace. :)
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November 18, 2013 at 5:24 AM
You come up with such wonderful surprises. "bumbershoot" love it. I just adore reading your delightful poems.
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