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misty

loneliness in a busy room dark gray clouds threaten rain birds singing, a flash of sun can't help feelings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:14 PM
loved 'loneliness is a busy room' powerful words and the perfect image, Sara K. sending you hugs, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Thank you, Sara B., for the nice review. It is amazing how we can be lonely in a busy room, but it happens. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:58 PM
Ah yes. It reminds me of Play Misty for Me though that was more like a mystery or thriller movie
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:40 AM
As far as I know, Andrea, I have never seen that particular movie. I could have but have forgotten. I don't watch thrillers or scary movies very often but will watch a murder mystery. I like the trying to figure out who did the crime. Thank you for the visit. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 1:57 AM
Winter is always depressing, especially with heavy rain and storms. Cling to the flash of the sun.
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Victor. I am hoping to enjoy the sun today since it is shining right now melting the frost of last night. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Sara, You have written a beautiful poem with emotional honesty at its core. Each word and line a treasure. I always value your insights on my work, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the review and uplifting spirit. Sara K
George Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 10:14 PM
When sky gets overcast with dark clouds, our mind also becomes gloomy, especially when we are alone. But a bright sun can light up our mood. Beautifully put.
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Sun is out today. I hope it warms up like it said it would so we can go outside this afternoon and get a little Vitamin D. The sun does help raise our serotonin levels. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 5:33 PM
Hang onto that flash of sun! It's true, you can't help feelings!
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 6:03 AM
David, I appreciate the visit and encouraging comments. The sun is out today but cold this morning is very chilling. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 3:53 PM
some sadness, sorry for Christmas solitude, hard time for many wishes
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Putting it into words can help, not change nor fix, but express! Hugs, sweet one!
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Sometimes sunlight can help because it effects the serotonin in the brain. I am having the worst time in the mornings with the effects of grief. Mornings used to be my best time of the day then it got less and less so. I hope the grief work gets better soon. Thank you for the visit, Kim. Sara K
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