Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Haiku

Mistress of the Sea

Song of the waves beckon
                           the heart calleth, deep unto deep
                                captive mistress of the sea




  This poem is dedicated to the fisrt time I saw
the ocean. I watched the sun rise over the Alantic Ocean.
I remember I stood there looking over the ocean, 
and it seemed as though the whole world held its breath,
 and then the sun came up! I was her captive from that moment. 


by Lori McClure

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John Freeman September 3, 2011 at 10:52 AM Lori, a pleasure to see your worthy poem in first place. Agape, Moses

Dinda Minardi September 3, 2011 at 10:41 AM Congratulations, Lori. Great Haiku on nature... I also admire the mighty of waves and oceans. :)

Jack Horne September 3, 2011 at 10:30 AM Many congratulations, Lori : )

Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 at 3:10 AM A First Place Win Congratulations. CR

Margaret Foster September 2, 2011 at 3:23 AM Lovely words Lori, more than just a memory an experience. congratulations. regards Marg

Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 12:40 AM Its absolutely mesmerizing isn't it. Nicely done and congratulations on your great win. Lee

Olusegun Arowolo September 1, 2011 at 5:52 PM Congratulations on your win,Lori...Keep flying..

Constance La France September 1, 2011 at 3:02 PM Congratulations Lori on a first place win in my contest, this poem really spoke to my heart and soul, it was so visual and all that done in so few words ~~

Wilma Neels September 1, 2011 at 2:10 PM Lori, congratulations on your awesome first place win in Constance's contest ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 2:03 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Paul Beadnall September 1, 2011 at 1:08 PM Congratulations,a view that has captured your eye and portrayed for us to share,blessings from Paul

Joyce Johnson September 1, 2011 at 11:23 AM A beautiful picture you drew for us land dwellers. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 11:03 AM Congrats Lori on your first place win with this lovely poetry luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on the first place win , Lori

David Williams September 1, 2011 at 10:30 AM hey Lori congrats on a fantastic win..David

Carrie Richards September 1, 2011 at 10:08 AM What a lovely poem, and your description of that moment makes it even more meaningful. Congratulations, Lori!

Matthew Anish August 7, 2011 at 10:15 PM Reminds me of a Moody Bliues tune - "Voices in the Sky" where the singer intones that "I lie awake with the sound of the sea calling to me" Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:37 PM This seems mysterious and classic!

Amanda Moore August 3, 2011 at 7:33 PM mysterious and wild this was a treasure to read.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 3, 2011 at 11:05 AM Lovely haiku with good expressive images, Lori