Mistress

Intimate moments were shared – his fingers sweep her lovely neck, tickling her frets.
Releasing sweet rhythms from the depths of her maple wood heart,
her vocal cords sing the blues as they kiss the hands that unleash her voice!
Distortions of life reverberate through the land where cotton is still king.
Lucille & B.B. a lifetime affair; making love on stage, creating a voyeuristic experience. 
Educating the world on southern living; through music that transcends all generations,
his diary of songs speak his heart through notes that rain from his Gibson guitar

Every mistress’s code name - Lucille …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/20/2010 5:59:00 PM
wow, you wrote a GREAT poem on BB King. I'd put this one higher on the list! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2010 12:08:00 PM
Creative take on the topic. Had to chuckle at your last line. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success!!! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/11/2010 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...Enjoyed reading your HOT poem...Marty
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Date: 2/11/2010 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the BB King contest.. an amazing write .. an amazing win .. for an amazing musician.. and legend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/11/2010 8:27:00 AM
Oh yes....this says everything we could want to know about this amazing music maker!! Well done, Abe!! (ps....I am SO GLAD to see you back here with your wonderful poetry!! ) Congratulations on this one, and more to come!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/11/2010 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful Abe. Great job congratulations -Robert
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's B B King Contest Abe. Every poem on the winners list was an outstanding piece. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:22:00 AM
Abe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:25:00 AM
Sensual and Romantic as each Mistress would be,love this one Abe,beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:25:00 PM
Abe, B.B. makes his Lucille cry, this perfect piece would make B.B. cry >> its simply a joy to read >> good luck in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:57:00 AM
A very delightful collage of images from a master of words, another triumph of your pen, Abe. Thanks for reading me on Haiti, what a human tragedy that is ... what a broken moment to let us in. One love
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:01:00 AM
very beautiful poem!! Great! love it!
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:48:00 PM
Such a great tribute to a fantastic musician as B.B. King and who could forget Lucille? should place very high if not 1st in Raul's contest... my entry is Showmanship.. he is a great artist.. and this is going to my favs right now.. good to hear from u Abe..hope all is well.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/4/2010 9:21:00 AM
Excellent write Abe. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:10:00 AM
Very nice. Can feel the affection
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