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Mistletoe

Merrily, merrily, 
mystify him gently, 
manage him to the door.
Make sure he sees the sprig,
manifest, boldly ask,
majestic  tradition,
mirthfully with a kiss.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2024

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Susan Ashley Date: 1/31/2024 6:15:00 PM Dear Victor, your poem uses the Pleiades form in a most romantic way. Wonderful, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/24/2024 9:20:00 AM Cute. :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2024 7:49:00 PM Cute one! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/21/2024 6:11:00 PM very cute poem Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/20/2024 10:09:00 AM I think with or without a mistletoe this lovely lady would have no difficulty garnering a kiss. A fun one Victor. ;0) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2024 8:24:00 AM So cute. What made you think to do this right now? Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 1/20/2024 4:03:00 AM Victor, sweet and romantic. Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/19/2024 5:09:00 PM A sweet poem, masterfully written. :) Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 1/19/2024 12:18:00 PM Great use of the form.. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 1/19/2024 8:49:00 AM A lovely piece of writing, Victor, that exudes a sense of romance and lyrical mesmerization through the use of exquisite alliteration. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/19/2024 7:56:00 AM Mistletoe a blessed twig for a kiss.. love it. hugs eve Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 1/19/2024 7:47:00 AM so cute, in france we say, kissed under mistletoe, married in the year, thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/19/2024 7:22:00 AM Ahh!! Cute one. The mistletoe trick. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/19/2024 6:56:00 AM A beautiful write, dear Victor, with a romantic ambience that serenades lyrically with wonderful alliterations.. A creative Pleiades poem too, it's a tricky form but you've made it flow really well.. Sending you light & best wishes ~ Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/19/2024 6:16:00 AM She sure has a plan. A fun read, Victor. I like the ending as well. Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 1/19/2024 3:16:00 AM A sweet fun poem Victor! Debx Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/19/2024 2:42:00 AM An offer no man can refuse Victor. Tom Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 1/19/2024 2:21:00 AM Dear Victor, This is so uplifting and i love the alliterations in your pleiades, been a while since iv last read one and yours definitely is creative and very festive and has a romantic ambience to it along with a lyrical flow. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light today and always Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2024 1:49:00 AM - A sweet one, Victor :) - hugs Login to Reply