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Mistletoe

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Merrily, merrily, mystify him gently, manage him to the door. Make sure he sees the sprig, manifest, boldly ask, majestic tradition, mirthfully with a kiss.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/31/2024 6:15:00 PM

Dear Victor, your poem uses the Pleiades form in a most romantic way. Wonderful, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/24/2024 9:20:00 AM

Cute. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2024 7:49:00 PM

Cute one!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/21/2024 6:11:00 PM

very cute poem

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/20/2024 10:09:00 AM

I think with or without a mistletoe this lovely lady would have no difficulty garnering a kiss. A fun one Victor. ;0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2024 8:24:00 AM

So cute. What made you think to do this right now?

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/20/2024 4:03:00 AM

Victor, sweet and romantic.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/19/2024 5:09:00 PM

A sweet poem, masterfully written. :)

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2024 12:18:00 PM

Great use of the form..

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/19/2024 8:49:00 AM

A lovely piece of writing, Victor, that exudes a sense of romance and lyrical mesmerization through the use of exquisite alliteration.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/19/2024 7:56:00 AM

Mistletoe a blessed twig for a kiss.. love it. hugs eve

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/19/2024 7:47:00 AM

so cute, in france we say, kissed under mistletoe, married in the year, thanks for sharing

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2024 7:22:00 AM

Ahh!! Cute one. The mistletoe trick. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/19/2024 6:56:00 AM

A beautiful write, dear Victor, with a romantic ambience that serenades lyrically with wonderful alliterations.. A creative Pleiades poem too, it's a tricky form but you've made it flow really well.. Sending you light & best wishes ~

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2024 6:16:00 AM

She sure has a plan. A fun read, Victor. I like the ending as well.

Deb M

Date: 1/19/2024 3:16:00 AM

A sweet fun poem Victor! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2024 2:42:00 AM

An offer no man can refuse Victor. Tom

Ink Empress

Date: 1/19/2024 2:21:00 AM

Dear Victor, This is so uplifting and i love the alliterations in your pleiades, been a while since iv last read one and yours definitely is creative and very festive and has a romantic ambience to it along with a lyrical flow. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light today and always

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2024 1:49:00 AM

- A sweet one, Victor :) - hugs