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Mistletoe

Merrily, merrily, mystify him gently, manage him to the door. Make sure he sees the sprig, manifest, boldly ask, majestic tradition, mirthfully with a kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Dear Victor, your poem uses the Pleiades form in a most romantic way. Wonderful, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Cute. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:49 PM
Cute one!
Rose  Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 6:11 PM
very cute poem
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 10:09 AM
I think with or without a mistletoe this lovely lady would have no difficulty garnering a kiss. A fun one Victor. ;0)
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 8:24 AM
So cute. What made you think to do this right now?
Kitchin Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 4:03 AM
Victor, sweet and romantic.
Buehler Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 5:09 PM
A sweet poem, masterfully written. :)
One Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Great use of the form..
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 8:49 AM
A lovely piece of writing, Victor, that exudes a sense of romance and lyrical mesmerization through the use of exquisite alliteration.
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Mistletoe a blessed twig for a kiss.. love it. hugs eve
Rolland Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 7:47 AM
so cute, in france we say, kissed under mistletoe, married in the year, thanks for sharing
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Ahh!! Cute one. The mistletoe trick. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Sharma  Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 6:56 AM
A beautiful write, dear Victor, with a romantic ambience that serenades lyrically with wonderful alliterations.. A creative Pleiades poem too, it's a tricky form but you've made it flow really well.. Sending you light & best wishes ~
Pandit Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 6:16 AM
She sure has a plan. A fun read, Victor. I like the ending as well.
M  Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 3:16 AM
A sweet fun poem Victor! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 2:42 AM
An offer no man can refuse Victor. Tom
Empress Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 2:21 AM
Dear Victor, This is so uplifting and i love the alliterations in your pleiades, been a while since iv last read one and yours definitely is creative and very festive and has a romantic ambience to it along with a lyrical flow. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light today and always
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 1:49 AM
- A sweet one, Victor :) - hugs
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