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Mister Protects the Birdseed

Such a contest!! .... what a rivalry!! Who will win? Its a cliff hanger ... Slowly Squirrel comes to ground, tail flicking up and down than off he (or is it she?) scurries to a box in the yard that holds bird seed on which this little thief will feed as Mister The Dog watches from his snuggly bed inside. Away from this view, I hear an insistant whine saying, "Let me out ... NOW!" It might mean Mister has business to do and, since I don't know for sure, I open the door as off he tears to chase the chattering squirrel scrambling up the tree that now has no leaves in which to hide but strong skeleton arms to hold it tight, as Mister jumps and barks and lets Squirrel know, "I'll get you next time!" There's always a next time .... Better squirrel chasing as it runs up the tree than the cat who leads Mister on a chase all around the neighborhood ... but thats a tale for another day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/7/2008 9:47:00 AM
Cute and funny.I can just visualize busy squirrel and mischievious Mister. I could watch them all day.Animals bring us so much joy. Thank you for your kind comments dear friend..
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Date: 12/7/2008 7:01:00 AM
This can very well make a great children's story, Sue and I am wondering are you writing a children's book? Great storytelling here! Celeste
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Date: 12/5/2008 3:34:00 PM
I was in a grumpy mood until I read this poem! LOL! Although, I am not fond of squirrels - the caricatures displayed gave me a big smile! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 12/3/2008 2:02:00 AM
Lovely poem Sue. Nice work!! Thank you for your advise on To YOu, Unkind Sir, I have amended the form. Peace Fathima
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:03:00 AM
Artful creatures are they not.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Sue
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Date: 12/2/2008 4:54:00 PM
I just love pets, and this is such a cute story. I could see the whole thing perfectly clearly! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/2/2008 2:44:00 AM
I saw the entire show. Thanks for sharing, Sue. lainie
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Date: 12/1/2008 5:15:00 PM
I enjoyed this tale Sue. A moment captured so wonderfully with words. Thanks for your constant comments on my work. Love, Chris.
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:34:00 PM
mister must ba a jack russle? i can see him now . nice work John H Loving III
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Date: 12/1/2008 2:44:00 PM
My dog too!!! Often it's at night though, with the raccoons or possums and I definitely do NOT let him out as some of those raccoons are almost as huge as a baby bear! Gotta love their natural instinct to protect...is that what it is??? Great write! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/1/2008 1:24:00 PM
Such a true to life scene....in our own backyard!! Were you here today....??? This goes on frequently...those squirrels always win the contest!! ~ Cute, cute poem! ~ Carrie
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