Mister Protects the Birdseed

Such a contest!! .... what a rivalry!!
Who will win?  Its a cliff hanger ...

Slowly Squirrel comes to ground,
tail flicking up and down
than off he (or is it she?)
scurries to a box in the yard
that holds bird seed
on which this little thief will feed
as Mister The Dog watches
from his snuggly bed inside.

Away from this view, I hear
an insistant whine saying,
"Let me out ... NOW!"
It might mean Mister has business
to do and, since I don't know
for sure, I open the door
as off he tears to chase
the chattering squirrel
scrambling up the tree that
now has no leaves in which to hide
but strong skeleton arms to
hold it tight, as Mister jumps
and barks and lets Squirrel know,
"I'll get you next time!"
There's always a next time ....

Better squirrel chasing as it runs up the tree
than the cat who leads Mister on a chase
all around the neighborhood ...
but thats a tale for another day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Okubo Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 9:47 AM
Cute and funny.I can just visualize busy squirrel and mischievious Mister. I could watch them all day.Animals bring us so much joy. Thank you for your kind comments dear friend..
Butler-Mendez Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 7:01 AM
This can very well make a great children's story, Sue and I am wondering are you writing a children's book? Great storytelling here! Celeste
Heck Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 3:34 PM
I was in a grumpy mood until I read this poem! LOL! Although, I am not fond of squirrels - the caricatures displayed gave me a big smile! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
Dawood Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 2:02 AM
Lovely poem Sue. Nice work!! Thank you for your advise on To YOu, Unkind Sir, I have amended the form. Peace Fathima
Strand Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 1:03 AM
Artful creatures are they not.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Sue
Thomas Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 4:54 PM
I just love pets, and this is such a cute story. I could see the whole thing perfectly clearly! ~Juliane
George   Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 2:44 AM
I saw the entire show. Thanks for sharing, Sue. lainie
Higgins Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:15 PM
I enjoyed this tale Sue. A moment captured so wonderfully with words. Thanks for your constant comments on my work. Love, Chris.
Loving Iii Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:34 PM
mister must ba a jack russle? i can see him now . nice work John H Loving III
Winter Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 2:44 PM
My dog too!!! Often it's at night though, with the raccoons or possums and I definitely do NOT let him out as some of those raccoons are almost as huge as a baby bear! Gotta love their natural instinct to protect...is that what it is??? Great write! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 1:24 PM
Such a true to life scene....in our own backyard!! Were you here today....??? This goes on frequently...those squirrels always win the contest!! ~ Cute, cute poem! ~ Carrie
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