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Mistaken Idenity


We went to a grand masquerade,
  My love and I, this night;
I wore a sweet pink gown and mask,
  Oh, we were quite a sight.

I was twirled and swirled and then dipped,
  In my ear he whispered;
At the stroke of midnight we meet,
  Sweet kissing-  I pictured.

Our meeting place, the rose arbor,
  I spoke with the handsome;
Many a slow dance with masked men,
  Love vanished-  a phantom.

Midnight and out to the garden,
  Oh, so dark with shadow;
I saw him under the arbor,
  And there was no hello.

I kissed his lips with deep desire,
  And he enclosed me tight;
But, I sensed something different--
  Why was the moon not bright?

I pulled away with a loud gasp,
  This man was not my love;
I bumped into my love walking,
  I flew like a pink dove.

Inside, I collected myself,
  Two men- and one did wink;
Oh my dear, have you met my twin--
  I blushed a deep pink, pink.

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July 27, 2016

Poetry/Rhyme/Mistaken Identity
Copyright Protected, ID 812-030-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the Premiere Contest Number 4
sponsor, A Skat

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Jay Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:02 AM
awesome
Camara Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 11:06 PM
That's really witty, beautiful and quite lovely
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Richards Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:21 PM
You are so prolific with these wonderful poems, Constance. Always impressing the page with your imagination !! Congrats to you !
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Great to see this one up on the podium Constance...congrats
Arnone Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Very nice, B. W. I still can't believe Emma Rossum can sing so sweet (Phantom Of The Opera, 2004).... Congrats on your placement! ;-) P.S. Why is your name so huge on the list?
A  Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog 'Mistaken Identity.' Forever **SKAT**
Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 12:26 AM
I am always like this.... too drunk.. // Forget about the moon , do you like to get blushed? I do.....
Y. Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Hi BW, This is a great entry for contest. I enjoyed the surprising twist at the end. Best of luck in the contest. A big seven:-) Alexis
Rycroft Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:00 AM
A very beautiful poem x
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Wonderful ... Great write ...
Raynes Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:58 PM
lol.... bet this has happened somewhere on earth, nice write, great thoughts.
Beaufort Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Really a funny takeout. You have been writing a lot, and I have not. However, I wanted to let you know I am sending you beams of good just now. You have a gift and resonate it to me and others. For that--a heartfelt thanks.
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 3:38 PM
So passionate until.... the fateful twist...lovely Constance
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 3:35 PM
ha ha ha I love the twist at the end - good luck in the contest I think this is fabulous:-) hugs Jan xx
Tacito Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 3:35 PM
A fascinating trip into a time that seems to have been forgotten...incredible tone set.
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM
I'll be back when it's done...Please remind me when it's complete.
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