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Mistaken Idenity


We went to a grand masquerade,
  My love and I, this night;
I wore a sweet pink gown and mask,
  Oh, we were quite a sight.

I was twirled and swirled and then dipped,
  In my ear he whispered;
At the stroke of midnight we meet,
  Sweet kissing-  I pictured.

Our meeting place, the rose arbor,
  I spoke with the handsome;
Many a slow dance with masked men,
  Love vanished-  a phantom.

Midnight and out to the garden,
  Oh, so dark with shadow;
I saw him under the arbor,
  And there was no hello.

I kissed his lips with deep desire,
  And he enclosed me tight;
But, I sensed something different--
  Why was the moon not bright?

I pulled away with a loud gasp,
  This man was not my love;
I bumped into my love walking,
  I flew like a pink dove.

Inside, I collected myself,
  Two men- and one did wink;
Oh my dear, have you met my twin--
  I blushed a deep pink, pink.

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July 27, 2016

Poetry/Rhyme/Mistaken Identity
Copyright Protected, ID 812-030-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the Premiere Contest Number 4
sponsor, A Skat

Ninth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/3/2016 2:02:00 AM
awesome
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Date: 8/2/2016 11:06:00 PM
That's really witty, beautiful and quite lovely
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Date: 8/2/2016 4:32:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:21:00 PM
You are so prolific with these wonderful poems, Constance. Always impressing the page with your imagination !! Congrats to you !
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:20:00 PM
Great to see this one up on the podium Constance...congrats
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Date: 8/2/2016 1:58:00 PM
Very nice, B. W. I still can't believe Emma Rossum can sing so sweet (Phantom Of The Opera, 2004).... Congrats on your placement! ;-) P.S. Why is your name so huge on the list?
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Date: 8/2/2016 10:44:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog 'Mistaken Identity.' Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/31/2016 12:26:00 AM
I am always like this.... too drunk.. // Forget about the moon , do you like to get blushed? I do.....
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Date: 7/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
Hi BW, This is a great entry for contest. I enjoyed the surprising twist at the end. Best of luck in the contest. A big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/28/2016 7:00:00 AM
A very beautiful poem x
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:33:00 AM
Wonderful ... Great write ...
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:58:00 PM
lol.... bet this has happened somewhere on earth, nice write, great thoughts.
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:56:00 PM
Really a funny takeout. You have been writing a lot, and I have not. However, I wanted to let you know I am sending you beams of good just now. You have a gift and resonate it to me and others. For that--a heartfelt thanks.
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:38:00 PM
So passionate until.... the fateful twist...lovely Constance
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:35:00 PM
A fascinating trip into a time that seems to have been forgotten...incredible tone set.
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:35:00 PM
ha ha ha I love the twist at the end - good luck in the contest I think this is fabulous:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2016 1:25:00 PM
I'll be back when it's done...Please remind me when it's complete.
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