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Mistake After Mistake

You may call me stubborn but that's your mistake I'm not rude, I'm not callous but I am not yours to take You hurt me before that was your wrong I shut you out now I can prove that I'm strong Love you no longer Only hard feelings exist I won't take you back though your hard to resist Sadness and heartbreak that's no longer true I know what you think But I can be everything without you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 11:01:00 AM
Stay firm and strong. Stick by your guns. Good write.
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:13:00 PM
very interesting! just some advice: on lines 3 and 4, it should be: I'm not rude, I'm not callous AND I am not yours to take
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:06:00 PM
At first, i thought this was really actually about mistakes, but once i read this i was like "oooo...that's good"...i love it!!! :D ...God Bless and keep writing...-Brittany-
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:38:00 AM
Interesting rhymes.. Quite hypnotizing.
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:05:00 AM
very nice. so strong. grrr! :) x
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Date: 1/19/2010 10:48:00 AM
Story of my life. Great write :)
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:28:00 PM
wow. thats all i can say. wow.
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:55:00 AM
it's is the worst pain, isnt it? heartbreak i mean. good one!
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:55:00 AM
I like that show's how your strong very good poem.
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:21:00 PM
Stay strong, Brittany! Great write! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:20:00 AM
If your words are true, then you are very unique; not many girls can stay strong in the scene that this poem illustrates.
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