The Melody Sings Poet Rhyme

Mistake After Mistake

You may call me stubborn
but that's your mistake
I'm not rude, I'm not callous
but I am not yours to take

You hurt me before
that was your wrong
I shut you out now
I can prove that I'm strong

Love you no longer
Only hard feelings exist
I won't take you back
though your hard to resist

Sadness and heartbreak
that's no longer true
I know what you think
But I can be everything without you

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Ralph Taylor March 18, 2010 at 11:01 AM Stay firm and strong. Stick by your guns. Good write.

Gabrielle Clemens March 8, 2010 at 12:13 PM very interesting! just some advice: on lines 3 and 4, it should be: I'm not rude, I'm not callous AND I am not yours to take

Brittany Moon March 8, 2010 at 12:06 PM At first, i thought this was really actually about mistakes, but once i read this i was like "oooo...that's good"...i love it!!! :D ...God Bless and keep writing...-Brittany-

Jay Smith January 21, 2010 at 9:38 AM Interesting rhymes.. Quite hypnotizing.

Isabella Seccombe January 20, 2010 at 11:05 AM very nice. so strong. grrr! :) x

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery January 19, 2010 at 10:48 AM Story of my life. Great write :)

G G January 15, 2010 at 3:28 PM wow. thats all i can say. wow.

Joanna Smith January 14, 2010 at 10:55 AM it's is the worst pain, isnt it? heartbreak i mean. good one!

Robert Stevens January 14, 2010 at 10:55 AM I like that show's how your strong very good poem.

Audrey Haick January 5, 2010 at 1:21 PM Stay strong, Brittany! Great write! Peace and love, Audrey

Jay Smith January 5, 2010 at 11:20 AM If your words are true, then you are very unique; not many girls can stay strong in the scene that this poem illustrates.