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Mistake-Free Poems I'Ll Give You

Two successive dates I failed to hit the mark I'm sorry for the mistakes And the crestfallen shark On the first, I didn't use Much needed commas and slashes Flowers I failed to produce Absent were the flamenco flashes I now do understand Beauty of punctuation Undulations of the land Whispering illustration And the slanting slashes Those acute angles Poetry to eyelashes Loosening many tangles Superb instrument dash A pause to look at your work Warns you before being rash Watches where lightning lurks Stanzas bring out sparks Red violet and pink A ray between two darks A fillip to potent ink Thanks for your expertise It has made me mature No mistakes in the next exercise I'm more than sure Especially the short stanzas I was unmindful so long Now these will be in bonanza Lilac lyrics of a song Do fix the next date Mistake-free poems I'll give you You will feel a tidal elate Like the autumn silver dew _________________________________ August 31, 2019 Overcoming Mistakes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/13/2019 2:25:00 PM
A nice reminder of a poem...congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne ...
Date: 9/12/2019 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The concept of mistake taken to beautiful poetic height.
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Date: 9/14/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot for liking ...
Date: 9/11/2019 8:20:00 PM
This made me think that I'm sure I don't always use punctuation correctly but will try to remember to. Congratulations on your win and blessings always.
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:25:00 AM
Yes, dear friend ... Punctuation is important! ... Thank you so much for liking the poem ...
Date: 9/1/2019 7:35:00 AM
I often don't use punctuation or maybe not enough in the right places so i can relate to your poem and as for placing in contests I just post and hope but I guess no matter how hard we try we can't place in them all:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2019 12:26:00 PM
Hope you are telling metaphorically ... In that case, I agree absolutely ...

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