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Mist Rising

As I sit alone on this rocky shore. The mist rises around my feet and I long for much, much more. Just to go out to sea and meet the horizon just you and me in our blazon. To feel the salt water as we sail away to enjoy the beauty of this day in this very protected bay. To kiss the rose of early bright. Maybe stay way into the night and see the moon and billions of stars. Reach up and touch the loving God. The one who made you for me and made the sea and misty shores that consumes all my lonely and tiresome chores.

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/13/2010 4:18:00 AM

Last one before I get off here for now, and it was just as amazing as the others, I love your works,you just may end up being my fav poet after a few more readings... Wow, I could see everything in my head, you paint with your words, a true artist my friend. Amazing

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 2/26/2010 5:27:00 AM

Sara the sea is such a lovely place to be so that you can enjoy the peace and the harmony as you set sail into the winds so that you can listen to the dolphins and whales as they sing underneath the moonlight while you make wishes upon the thousands of stars that fill the skies so that this amazing moment will never end,Thank you for allowing me to see through your eyes today instead of my own because you allowed my mind to sail away on a pleasant journey. :) Have a fantastic day Dean

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/22/2010 1:23:00 PM

A lovely write, Sara. Thank you for your kind comments left for me. ....Jimmy

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/22/2010 4:57:00 AM

Looking back to the sea and feeling a nice salty breeze is what I am sometimes missing. Enjoyed your Prose Poetry, Sara. Have a nice week and thank you for your comments...Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 2/21/2010 11:51:00 PM

Very wistful write Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2010 8:30:00 PM

enjoyed today

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/21/2010 8:28:00 AM

I can picture myself in your words, Sara. Nicely done, so descriptive! ~ Carrie

Skat A

Date: 2/21/2010 1:38:00 AM

THE SEA IS MY FAVRIOTE PLACE..I LIVE 20 MILES BY THESEA SHORES IN TEXAS..I LOVE YOUR POEM.. IT IS VERY FASCINATING . I LOVE THE STRESS FREE IMSGE ON YOUR POEM....IRMA

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/20/2010 6:26:00 PM

Wow, you express lonliness in your poem in such a beautiful way(: -Always&Forever Lynette

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/20/2010 4:13:00 PM

Awesome, Sara! Great prose poetry. You should enter this in the contest, "act 1, scene 1". I think it would do real well. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2010 3:42:00 PM

How beautiful is this poem..serene and peaceful..going to my favz..Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 3:30:00 PM

Wonderful, Sara, i love the desciptiveness of this sweet poem. LUv, Andrea