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Mist of Night Wafts--Lune

from mist-clad tassels

immaculate leaves of night waft

bearing frosty scent



Andrea Dietrich's Pretty Little Lunes  Contest
8/6/2015   Collom Lune # 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Martin Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Do not usually comment on near haiku writing here but this one is wonderful!!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:02 PM
Perfect depict of the pic nette! Congrats on a wonderful win!
Merryman Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:21 PM
A unique rendering of the photo! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:43 PM
A sweet win Nette... LINDA
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Nette, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
May Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win
Mandani Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:29 AM
It tempts me to take a dip in the frosty lake! Nice.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:27 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Grats on your win with this beautiful frosty write :)
Callus Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 5:59 AM
An appealing sensual take on an inspiring visual, Nette. Beautiful! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win:) Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:01 AM
Nette, not many chose this picture. What I liked best that you did was the way you used alliteration.All those T sounds were so CRISP to go with that FROSTY scent! Each line sang with beauty! Congrats in my contest.
Datu Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Great use of metaphors. A tasseled view of trees scenting a cold night is a wonder. i revel at your poetry!
Datu Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:59 PM
make it 7 +
La France Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Nette, so very beautiful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, but she .. I am looking forward to the ending too
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:46 AM
- Really wonderful !!!! - I wish you luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marty Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:48 AM
This glorious poem stirs and heightens the senses, opens the eyes to the natural sounds and beauty of a view.
Sabre Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Elegant, beautiful setting and poem! The colorful imagery gives the reader a taste of the scene.
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 3:41 PM
The imagery is sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Lalion Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Exquisite picture upon which misty, crystal-clear thoughts take flight I admire your art!
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