Russell Sivey Poet Rispetto

Mist In the Woods

From a distance the mist covers everything
The magical woods is hidden behind this
Walking through this gruesome woods the fog does sing
Powers of darkness encompassed by the mist
Sun tries to pierce the hollow of the center
But can’t make it through, ranting on its banter
Beating off its own light, mist carries onward
Feeding on the cloudy scene closing toward

Russell Sivey

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Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 8:04 AM This is stunning Russell...the mist..fog..is mysterious or creepy according to our attitude..you paint it well with your words

Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 12:07 AM Another stunning write you've penned here exuding your superb talent my very dear friend Russell. So love it and enjoyed thoroughly. Hope i can try this form someday. You did it so well again. Biggest hugs back at u my dear friend thanking u for another gem you've lovingly shared. ! love lots, Leonora

Jack Horne March 23, 2014 at 2:32 PM love these descriptions - could so imagine this

Shadow Hamilton March 23, 2014 at 6:54 AM stark hidden by mist a magical place Russell a wonderful pen I do hope your internet is sorted out fast so I can read your wonderful words hugs

Sara Kendrick March 22, 2014 at 5:45 PM A misty day which can be good or bad just according to one's attitude..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sorry to hear about computer problems..That can be very frustrating..Sara

Jan Allison March 22, 2014 at 6:59 AM Wonderful imagery Russell. In the Isle of Man the sea mist is known as 'Manannan's Cloak' I think this is a perfect way to describe how the mist envelops its surroundings. Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis March 22, 2014 at 6:31 AM Under the cover of mist imagination ruptures bringing to life beauty in perpetuity! Marvelously done dear Russell!

Eileen Manassian March 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM How fascinating. Mist...It does have an eerie feel to it which you have captured well with this write, Russell. Very intriguing. One can almost picture the scene.