Andrea Dietrich Poet Alliteration

Notes About The Poem

For Eve Roper's Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Missy Sue

Missy Sue makes malted milk shakes
and she savors marmalade,
macaroons and snickerdoodles
and sweet souffles she has made.

Sue is messy slicing melons,
strawberries and mangoes too.
Sue munches seeds and celery sticks.
She mixes meats, making stew.

Milk chocolate -mouth-watering,
sweet and marvelously mild -
satisfies Missy Sue
mainly if it is Swiss styled!

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Terry Miller November 12, 2024 at 1:23 AM Great poem, congratulations

John Read November 7, 2024 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your nursery rhyme contest win Andrea.

Paula Goldsmith November 7, 2024 at 8:39 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write. Have a fun day writing away.............

Valsa George November 7, 2024 at 5:02 AM A beautifully alliterative poem. Though she is messy, she makes many mouth watering treats. Congratulations Andrea on your first place win.

Jim Healey November 7, 2024 at 3:19 AM This is making me hungry! Good job, as always.

Panagiota Romios October 19, 2024 at 11:28 AM Andrea! Your talent at a little is just stunning plus the use of the images made me laugh You have a great sense of humor that I appreciate.. Hugs, Pangie

Suzette Richards October 19, 2024 at 11:22 AM Now I fancy a snack ... Nice write, Andrea :)

John Read October 19, 2024 at 8:02 AM Hi Andrea, Suddenly for some reason I'm feeling hungry, it contains all the ingredients of a contest winner .

Victor Buhagiar October 19, 2024 at 3:23 AM You are adept at cooking, Andrea. Lovely rhymes too. Hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos October 19, 2024 at 2:36 AM I LIKE HER STYLE, MESSY BUT PRODUCES MOUTH WATERING RESULTS. MY COMPUTER LIKES CAPS AT PRESENT. SORRY. HUGS JEN. Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2024 at 11:19 AM I hate when that happens to me. Hope you get it figured out.

Joe Maverick October 18, 2024 at 11:32 PM Andrea..You have unleashed missy sue.' In the Event turning John into a (screen sniffer?) Even.) I advise you to be more responsible..' I Mean if a radical democrat saw that they would Be funneling money into a 'rehabilitation programne asap' oh its too real almost!! Mind.' t v ...prgramme..lol)

Paige Hind October 18, 2024 at 3:21 PM So clever! Funny, and clever! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 18, 2024 at 7:46 AM Really enjoyed the alliteration, Andrea! Marvellous!

Weston Gregory October 17, 2024 at 6:42 PM Nice and sumptuous imagery there is no getting around Missy sue, yes a foodie she is too. She munch seed and celery stick make me think of one who is thin. Good write.

John Lawless October 17, 2024 at 3:19 PM this had me sniffing the screen and licking my fingers....

Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2024 at 3:08 PM Helllo Andrea, Missy Sue, is very messy. I noticed that she loves her chocolate Swiss style. Hugs./Darlene/

Ink Empress October 17, 2024 at 8:50 AM Gosh this left me craving! Now I need chocolates! Love the way youv done alliterations, so subtle and seamless sweet andrea, and your rhymes and flawless. Flows very well! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always