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For Eve Roper's Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Missy Sue makes malted milk shakes and she savors marmalade, macaroons and snickerdoodles and sweet souffles she has made. Sue is messy slicing melons, strawberries and mangoes too. Sue munches seeds and celery sticks. She mixes meats, making stew. Milk chocolate -mouth-watering, sweet and marvelously mild - satisfies Missy Sue mainly if it is Swiss styled!

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Date: 11/12/2024 1:23:00 AM
Great poem, congratulations
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Date: 11/7/2024 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your nursery rhyme contest win Andrea.
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Date: 11/7/2024 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write. Have a fun day writing away.............
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Date: 11/7/2024 5:02:00 AM
A beautifully alliterative poem. Though she is messy, she makes many mouth watering treats. Congratulations Andrea on your first place win.
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Date: 11/7/2024 3:19:00 AM
This is making me hungry! Good job, as always.
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:28:00 AM
Andrea! Your talent at a little is just stunning plus the use of the images made me laugh You have a great sense of humor that I appreciate.. Hugs, Pangie
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:22:00 AM
Now I fancy a snack ... Nice write, Andrea :)
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Date: 10/19/2024 8:02:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Suddenly for some reason I'm feeling hungry, it contains all the ingredients of a contest winner .
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Date: 10/19/2024 3:23:00 AM
You are adept at cooking, Andrea. Lovely rhymes too. Hugs.
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Date: 10/19/2024 2:36:00 AM
I LIKE HER STYLE, MESSY BUT PRODUCES MOUTH WATERING RESULTS. MY COMPUTER LIKES CAPS AT PRESENT. SORRY. HUGS JEN.
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:19:00 AM
I hate when that happens to me. Hope you get it figured out.
Date: 10/18/2024 11:32:00 PM
Andrea..You have unleashed missy sue.' In the Event turning John into a (screen sniffer?) Even.) I advise you to be more responsible..' I Mean if a radical democrat saw that they would Be funneling money into a 'rehabilitation programne asap' oh its too real almost!! Mind.' t v ...prgramme..lol)
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Date: 10/18/2024 3:21:00 PM
So clever! Funny, and clever! :)
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Date: 10/18/2024 7:46:00 AM
Really enjoyed the alliteration, Andrea! Marvellous!
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Date: 10/17/2024 6:42:00 PM
Nice and sumptuous imagery there is no getting around Missy sue, yes a foodie she is too. She munch seed and celery stick make me think of one who is thin. Good write.
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Date: 10/17/2024 3:19:00 PM
this had me sniffing the screen and licking my fingers....
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Date: 10/17/2024 3:08:00 PM
Helllo Andrea, Missy Sue, is very messy. I noticed that she loves her chocolate Swiss style. Hugs./Darlene/
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Date: 10/17/2024 8:50:00 AM
Gosh this left me craving! Now I need chocolates! Love the way youv done alliterations, so subtle and seamless sweet andrea, and your rhymes and flawless. Flows very well! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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