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Missy Red Hood - Once Upon a Time


There lived a young girl in the town,
     so sad and a little bit down.
Her Grammy lay sick in her bed
     and had to be cared for and fed.

Each day she would get in her car,
     though Grammy was not very far.
Dressed up with her red-hooded coat
     with basket she'd visit, devote

an hour, maybe two, by Gram's side,
     who'd smile with eyes open so wide;
Gram called her 'my Missy Red-Hood',
     and loved her as much as she could.

One day she saw Grammy in bed,
     but something was strange with her head.
She quickly moved closer to see
     why Grammy looked so differently.

At once she was pulled down, amiss...
     received a romantic big kiss!
'Neath blanket hand rose up to bring
     a beautiful bright diamond ring!

Now Grammy, in corner aware,
     relaxed in her brown rocking chair,
enjoyed this great drama just staged.
     Her Missy Red-Hood was engaged!

So Missy's boyfriend and sweet Gram
     were pleased to unfold their great plan.
They borrowed the old fairy tale...
     Instead of a wolf, there was Dale!

Then Missy and Dale soon were wed,
     and Grammy got well, left her bed.
Their life was as good as can be.
     And so this tale ends happily!


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Once Upon A Time
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Theme: Little Red Riding Hood
Judged: 02/06/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win! Love your poem :-)
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February 7, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Thanks for the reply
Lane Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 5:19 PM
They really were fun, and congratulations to you, Sandra. I love Red's coat!
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Thanks, Lin. Yes, these were fun to work on! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Linda, once again for your supportive visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:02 AM
what a wonderful Tale with such a happy ending Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Jan. These fairy tale 'revisions' were a lot of fun. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Sandra, first of all I love the pic and you carried such a wonderful flow, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for being a part of my contest :)*Smiles* -luloo
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:00 PM
Hi Laura, thank you so much for your nice comments and for my great placement in your contest. It was so much fun to participate. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:09 PM
How cute this is !! This should make Laura smile.....!!! Good Luck !!!
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, Carrie. It was fun to work on. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Sandra, thank you so much for the reply on my comment. LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:05 PM
ahh, this was adorable, Sandra. So much better than the original tale
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Challenges like this are always fun! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:25 PM
i love happy endings Sandra:), good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Linda! It was fun to work on. Hugs, Sandra
Hy Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Such a sweet story Sandra... I loved it. Good luck with the contest. Hugs, Rahy
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Hi Rahy, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your supportive comments.! Hugs, Sandra
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