Missive To Heaven

Tonight I put her to bed with promises of faith
That God does not keep with me again
The wall closes in at the crumpled gate
My soul has clutched its prayer so in vain
Yet despite the silence of a sterile sky
I will not my convictions now deny
It is more than accident that brought us here
It is more than mortal death I fear
That ever I go away from this place, void
Still of knowing the purpose I came
The reason that I suppliant is most denied
My moth like desire for the brutal flame.
O let her sleep, but not my trust, O Lord
Remember me by the promise of your word
My sovereign King, my God, defender be
I stand before you naked, shaken like a tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/2/2009 2:12:00 PM
Great use of imagery and I welcome you to poetry soup...Raul
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:59:00 PM
wonderful write,remember me by the promise of your word-i just love it,built on strong faith-charma
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:35:00 AM
You are such a good writer my friend..sterile sky is just wonderful...standing before the maker bare and open..such a honest piece filled with hope and faith. Good writing again from you.
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:00:00 AM
selfless, faith-filled. wonderful! Jim
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