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"mississippi Mud/Flood"

My desserts not by special rules
The cause of many mouths of drools   

My special pie is a` La Mode
Makes finicky taste buds explode

Now my Mississippi mud
Why, it brings a mosaic flood

Then there’s my Peach cobbler
Many a  big tummy wobblier

Now there is my pie of raisin
Surely to draw much praising 

Why not ice cream your Apple pie 
Just go on to heaven and die

Let me tell you, my Cherry cheese
I never stump a toe, or sneeze

My cheesecakes, never a fake
My critics in their boots quake

Now let me proceed to make
You my German chocolate cake

For my dear Cherokee momma
Never did used store bought drama

I learn from mom, you all know
She brought my brown eyes to glow

The how of my special desserts
Pleases so very much it hurts

With my scrumptious dessert
Taste buds desire more than just flirt

Bringing your lust to a pitch
You certainly need bring a switch

For: Dreamy Desserts
Sponsored By: Linda-Marie Bariana
4th Placement

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2010 9:47:00 PM
Hey, you mentioned some great desserts here! Congrats on the 4th place. this was a really fun one to read. the mud pie and raisin pie sound best to ME. My great great grandma was full cherokee. how neat you got to be half Cherokee! luv, andrea
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:08:00 AM
Very sweet words John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:51:00 PM
There are so many wonderful deserts. Thanks for bringing them to mind, and thanks for your comment so kind.
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 8:57:00 PM
When and where is the party? I want to try them all! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 6/6/2010 8:33:00 PM
Congrats on the win, John
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:06:00 PM
great write, congrats on your win
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:53:00 PM
Well I expect that you are unable to get out of your chair and have broken your scale? Wow that is what would have happened to me with all of these on which to munch. Thank you for your delicious poem and congratulations on your win. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 6/6/2010 1:12:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your winning poem in my contest.. this was as awesome as u are and I read it over and over again.. appreciate u supporting my contest.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/5/2010 11:19:00 PM
sounds so scrumptious to eat right now, Moses! you did awesome. good luck in this very edible contest! i hope you are well! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:54:00 AM
You have presented us with many and I bet it is hard to make a choice as to which one is the best or favorite...Great write that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 6/5/2010 3:20:00 AM
Delighted to enjoy the dessert and have forgotten to bring a switch, John
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Date: 6/5/2010 1:53:00 AM
This is delicious and so yummy John!great entry,yum!C elene.
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