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Missing You

Missing you as I

touch small things you left behind

when I find in your drawer

my last gift to you -

the watch you had vowed to wear

while you were away from me.


Aug. 10, 2017

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2017

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Jean Murray Date: 6/12/2019 1:04:00 AM A moment caught in time becomes a poignant memory. Heavy with loss. Congratulations on your placement Andrea. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/11/2019 8:38:00 PM Congratulations on your second place win Andrea. There are so many contests, I just can't keep up. I am working on PFT today. : ) xxoo Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2019 1:15:00 PM - Congratulations on your touching and great poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/9/2017 4:22:00 AM A touching poem!Loved it. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/12/2017 10:25:00 AM Oh! That was a truly false promise !! Nicely done, Andrea:) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 8/12/2017 10:07:00 AM Hi Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest. What a moving and touching write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-Alexis Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 8/11/2017 8:25:00 PM This is a nice one. Because that's how people feel about memories. So, as you can see. I trying to read more than one poem at a time :) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/11/2017 2:34:00 PM I feel empathy for those who have experienced this kind of painful loss so brilliantly expressed Andrea. : ) Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/11/2017 11:43:00 AM Always awesome Andrea. love phyl soup mail Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/11/2017 9:44:00 AM Oh this is amazing, Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/11/2017 3:22:00 AM Great writing, dear. Always. My POTD was Tit for Tat Poetry. Hugs Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/11/2017 2:23:00 AM Time heals...and yet 'time' opens those wounds again! The ending raises many an unanswered question! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 8/10/2017 11:28:00 PM Hi Andrea, a beautiful and sincere poem. It touched my heart. Good luck in the contest the contest. Login to Reply

Becca Teagan Date: 8/10/2017 9:56:00 PM Andrea, I love the impact here in such a short poem, this is not easy to do but you accomplished it quite well. very nice. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 8/10/2017 1:43:00 PM this is just perfect, andrea! the ending especially could not have been any better... Login to Reply

Dean Wood Date: 8/10/2017 12:02:00 PM What Tim said! This is terribly sad Andrea. Well done! -- Dean Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/10/2017 11:22:00 AM The sadness is palpable Andrea. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 8/10/2017 10:25:00 AM Nicely done, Andrea, luck in the contest ~* Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/10/2017 9:25:00 AM Wonderful write Andrea... the gift of time was a masterful ending... Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 8/10/2017 9:21:00 AM Nicely done for the contest Andrea. So sad. Login to Reply