Missing You

I had witten this piece some time ago
For Who ? now I know.........

Missing You 

It's a funny strange thing
When you're not around
Like the lack of a smile 
On a circus clown

Like a ferris wheel
With all empty seats
Or a candied apple
More tart than sweet

Or a merry-go-round
That looks kind of scary
Or that huge prize teddy
To big to carry

Like an amusement park
On a winters day
And as long as you're gone
That's the way it will stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gulley Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:05 AM
A lovely write Jerry. I like it so, Wishing you all the best. Sharon
Teagan Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 4:44 PM
This is so cute :) Makes me smile ... You're really sweet
Curtis Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:31 PM
It's you time Becca---take it.............and run
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Lovely write ...I do hope she changes her mind and stays Jerry!:-) hugs Jan xx
Curtis Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Thanks ---we all do
Turner Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Very sweet, Jerry. Any girl would love this!
Curtis Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Thanks Dan
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