Missing You

My heart is drowning and i can not swim, 
I do not know, where shall i begin,
All the things that were said and done, 
Wish i know just what went wrong,
i am confused and also in pain, 
Do not think my heart will mend again,

Thinking of the smiles that we had, 
I never thought that things were bad.
Looking back on the day we met, 
I always wanted to be your pet,

Now the time as came along, 
And end of the day has been drawn,
Wishing time has come and gone, 
All my life a will be alone,

With the sadness floating around, 
I really want to be in the ground,
But as time passes me by, 
I will always look into the sky. 
Seeing the kids growing old, 
This in life i will hold,

It keeps you going through thick and thin, 
And a new day will begin,
So do not let go for what you have, 
As the next day may be your last,

Keep on smiling and tap your feet, 
As you never know who you will meet,
It may be a friend or a loved one to, 
And i pray this never happens to you,
But if it does your not alone, 
There are many that has be on that thrown,
 
So just remember your heart is strong, 
And life will sing as it goes on, 
So keep your chin up and do not cry
Am sure in the end we will get by,,,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/7/2011 7:20:00 PM
Davy,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.
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Date: 10/26/2019 12:07:00 PM
thank you, thats me just finding out where comments are x
Date: 5/2/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Davy. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2019 12:08:00 PM
thank you so much carol. its an honer
Date: 5/1/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, davy
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Date: 3/21/2011 2:23:00 PM
Very heart touching poetry....thank you...
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