Missing You

She was wonderful and powerful
My object of desire
Her smooth clean face so beautiful
The apple of my eye

My love she had an accident
She fell from up on high
I found her broken body there
'Twas lying on the ground

Now all I have's her memory
The songs we used to share
Oh how I miss that ipod
My heart it megahertz
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Evette Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 7:00 AM
I almost started crying, lol. I do understand I am highly addicted to and obsessed with my iPod. Very clever write sir, very clever indeed. Love this Monica
James Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:31 PM
haha. Brilliant!! you had me going for a nano of a second!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 2:45 PM
U had me going Nick.. I was ready to run for a tissue when I read the last two lines and smiled again.... very innovative write.. my sons all have ipods so I know how dear they are to all who own them.. luv the "megahertz" ... terrific.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:10 AM
CLEVER, the apple of your eye!!! Enjoyed meeting a great poet, new for me here! LUv, Andrea
Young Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 5:45 AM
i love it it almost made me cry there seems to be a lot of this kind of stuff going around lately.
Beam Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:31 AM
funny good punch line thanks for comment on poem yes I was writing along that line for Deborah Guzzi's contest mission impossible!
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