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Missing You

My heart, a cold crypt Haunted by your ghostly thought Your casket empty Forgive my dark transgressions You’re my eternal moonlight

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/25/2024 11:33:00 AM

“ your casket empty” a very clever line! And i love the emotions flowing throughout this very well woven tanka! And the last line reminds me of my muse my moon! Pleasure always reading your work! Keep sharing and thank you for supporting my poems too i do appreciate your comments!

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/26/2024 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Empress. Always wonderful to read your comments. I appreciate your support as well

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/25/2024 9:17:00 AM

Poem has a poignant message. The last line turns this upside-down. Well done.

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/25/2024 10:05:00 AM

Good Morning Hilda, I always appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments. A pleasure reading this, this morning. Thank you so much for your support.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/24/2024 9:58:00 AM

Loved the emotions you exposed in this wonderful tanka.

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/24/2024 11:30:00 AM

Appreciate that Victor. Thank you for your kind words.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 6/24/2024 7:57:00 AM

well said - really like that second stanza, solid imagery, well phrased

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/24/2024 8:13:00 AM

Appreciate your response Mat, Thank you