Missing You

As I stood in the dark room
Filled with grief,
Memories of air shows, homemade cookies, and “fun”
Flushed my mind
I kept telling myself,
“It’s not my grandpa..Is it?”
Then I realized, from all the tears and suffering,
It was my grandpa.
I had so much fun with my grandpa
I didn’t believe what I was about to accept.
As the hospital machines beeped,
There was a new tear shed.
The grief from my grandma passing on,
Still pain in my heart.
Now it’s my grandfather suffering. 
It was the last time I was going to see him,
And I knew it.
As I walked up to my weary grandfather
And the wobbly hospital bed
I cried.
Knowing exactly what to say
I reached out with comforting hands
Grasped my grandpa with a tight squeeze
And said I love you for the last time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/11/2010 7:37:00 PM
Thank you to you all who like my poem. I wrote this when i was younger, like 15. now i am a little bit older and have lots more to post up here, i hope you all read it and give me input, i love input! helps me write and stay focused. again, thank you all :)
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Date: 7/27/2008 1:50:00 AM
that was heart felt and it home because my pop,pop died not to long ago.I really enjoyed it,so sincere WRITE ON
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Date: 7/10/2008 6:36:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jenna. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2008 12:28:00 PM
Hello Jenna Welcome to poetry soup hun. The older we get in life the more we live with loss but knowing we keep our loved ones with us in our heart and souls makes this lifes journey worth it. Hang in there sweetie it sure isn't easy sometimes but endure for we know we will one day come to embrace our loved ones once again. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful writing sweetie so keep it up okay! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/15/2008 1:17:00 PM
Hello ~ Jenna welcome to poetry soup. The people that we miss so... lives on through us continuing to live and the fond memories. B BLESS Crystal
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Date: 6/15/2008 9:09:00 AM
No dear one, not for the last time, you will keep their memory forever in your heart, and you will love them as long as there is a breath in your body. I lost mine, but I still love them so much, and each memory brings that love to life even more. My love to you, and may God wrap His arms around you ,and give you the strength to get through this sad time. Forever, Christy
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