Juaneco Torrente Poet Couplet

Missing Yellow Moments

I recall those moments on the gold hills
we used to sway around the daffodils.
My fingers then clutched a bunch in the air,
now, I miss placing lemon blooms on your hair.



United Colors: Yellow Contest   Silent One
March 3, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:34 PM Juaneco Torrente, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 12:55 PM this is so pretty!! Congrats on this poem you came up with.

Hansteven Selfa March 6, 2016 at 12:11 AM Congratulations Juaneco on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2016 at 11:27 AM awhh, the last line was sad but beautiful... sweet congrats, juaneco!

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2016 at 2:18 AM Flowers flatter anyone's face Juaneco. This is lovely! Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper March 4, 2016 at 11:10 PM Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Juaneco, great imagery !Hugs dear friend

Hija De La Luna March 4, 2016 at 8:15 PM Lovely piece! Congrats on your placement!

Beautiful Scars March 4, 2016 at 4:27 PM Juaneco, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Lin Lane March 3, 2016 at 4:41 PM This is very lovely, Juaneco.