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Missing Yellow Moments

I recall those moments on the gold hills we used to sway around the daffodils. My fingers then clutched a bunch in the air, now, I miss placing lemon blooms on your hair. United Colors: Yellow Contest Silent One March 3, 2016

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:34:00 PM
Juaneco Torrente, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:55:00 PM
this is so pretty!! Congrats on this poem you came up with.
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations Juaneco on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:27:00 AM
awhh, the last line was sad but beautiful... sweet congrats, juaneco!
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:18:00 AM
Flowers flatter anyone's face Juaneco. This is lovely! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/4/2016 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Juaneco, great imagery !Hugs dear friend
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Date: 3/4/2016 8:15:00 PM
Lovely piece! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:27:00 PM
Juaneco, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:41:00 PM
This is very lovely, Juaneco.
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