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Missing the Missed

Eyes from a distance Can your thoughts reach my sad soul? My heart does preach in its search... Lost in existence I’m longing for your presence Calling forever your name... Sedoka Style... 6 lines of 5-7-7-5-7-7 Aug.21.2017 Oh how I miss you Sponsored by: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/24/2017 6:08:00 PM

Congrats, WW!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/24/2017 5:53:00 PM

Beautiful poem, W2 - love it! Congrats, my friend! :-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2017 5:38:00 PM

Congratulations WW!! :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 8/24/2017 5:35:00 PM

Very emotive.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/23/2017 12:09:00 PM

Such a beautiful written poem, well it was the topic which attracted me, missing th missed, and later even the poem didn t disappoint me at all, it was an excellent write, well I m not experienced, but people tells me that poetey is all about imaginations, and how well can you describe your feelings, imaginations, emotions etc, and I must say that you ve surely describe them beautifully,

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2017 5:19:00 AM

Wow!! This is incredible WW! You have used the Sedoka form to the best that it could be done! You seemed to have mastered it very well my friend! What a lovely poem, so full of emotion and deep thought! I truly have enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning, what a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2017 5:55:00 PM

NIcely emotive sedoka, WW!! The middle line very powerful.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/21/2017 4:23:00 PM

Excellent WW...had me thinking...had to read over a couple times

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/21/2017 4:00:00 PM

So sad WW, best wishes in the contest...

Joseph May

Date: 8/21/2017 2:18:00 PM

Very nicely penned WW

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/21/2017 1:13:00 PM

Love this Sedoka poem--good luck for the contest!

Becca Teagan

Date: 8/21/2017 12:02:00 PM

Longing for their presence...thats what we do forever. Awesome Sedoka. :) hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2017 11:38:00 AM

I can feel this Sedoka you wrote WW. What a great one. It reaches the reader!

Silent One

Date: 8/21/2017 11:20:00 AM

Nice to see you do something that does not rhyme and the use of easy to understand language lol.. We always call the name of those who have departed.. its on the tip of our tongues, with every sigh..