Missing Teeth

Missing Teeth
                   Authored by Chuck Keys

a rainbow walked into my room
pretty enough to bloom
pink and purple with smiling missing 
teeth, happy as a butterfly cutely reminiscing

fulfilled deep brown eyes open wide sensitive
pensive and alert digesting the entirety of it all
innocently studying my face, yet with question
licking her lips, hungry in thought ...
reciprocal smiles signaling raceless acceptance 

blind to doubt, hate, and experience of time
wanting to thirst willing to trust without rage
demanding more giving more deserving more
she stands proud filled with sugary sweetness
youthfully contrasting my many years  

she calls me papa, i call her princess
missing teeth and all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Charming.
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Chuck. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2010 at 7:29 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with three wonderful poems, Chuck! Love, Carolyn
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September 23, 2010 at 10:28 PM
Chuck, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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September 23, 2010 at 11:41 AM
hello Chuck, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
Austin Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 10:44 AM
"Demanding more, giving more, deserving more" I shor do like this line mucho. Well, hell, the whole poem is great. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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September 21, 2010 at 10:22 PM
Congratulations on your delightful poem featured on the Soup this week. Peace, Audrey
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Chuck. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Congrats Chuck on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 3:58 PM
very sweet, Chuck, nice seeing you today. LUv, andrea
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May 19, 2010 at 3:55 PM
s.m.) ok. read it again, enjoy the missing teeth and all. What a day,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Wonderful poetry Chuck, a joy to read. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem, much appreciated >> James
Mcgovern Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 1:31 PM
A wonderful poem that most of us fathers can relate. The innocence of childhood is sadly so short lived, often all we have left is the memories. Our Princess leaves one stage and enters many transitional phases until she presents, now grandpa, with a new princess to reminisce once again. I love your poem, thanks for sharing and the trip down memory lane.
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May 4, 2010 at 6:56 PM
The surprise ending has me smiling. Nice tribute to your daughter. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Fisher Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Chuck. Love, Carol
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April 27, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Still so cute!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 1:07 PM
ooh la la, you can write!! this is so sweet and very fun to read. LUv, andrea
Brown Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 5:14 AM
I enjoyed reading the poetry you presented to us today Chuck. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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April 19, 2010 at 2:58 PM
sounds lovely!! children are so sweet...sometimes. I miss those days. though my son is playing in the floor with a truck and toys right now...He is for entertainment purposes only, I tell him.
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April 19, 2010 at 10:34 AM
liked this funny write, nice one
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 9:51 AM
It is free verse! and a good one too (a few comma's would help a bit LOL) but all and all a right fine free verse welcome to the soup!Light & Love
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