Missing Teeth

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Two front missing teeth back - this year all little Ashwin wants, No Pokémon cards, no candy, nothing else for Christmas. December 5, 2021 For "Your Funniest Couplet Ever" Contest Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2021 11:14:00 AM

A cute/fun write and picture. If you have your teeth you have it all for Christmas. hahahah Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 4:26:00 PM

how cute. Hey, isn't Ashwin the name of Anitha's son? Or do you have an Ashwin of your own?

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 5:39:00 PM

My grandson is Ashwin, Andrea - it’s the name of a Star in the constellation in our tradition. He is cute, and a math wizard! Thanks for dropping by. Love ~ Mala

Marikate Kingston

Date: 12/6/2021 7:10:00 PM

Hopefully no cavities in that cute mouth! Tee hee.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2021 3:02:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Cute picture to go along with the work. I can remember way back when my teeth came out, but I did not want teeth for Christmas. LOL.. Sara