Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Couplet

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Missing Teeth

Two front missing teeth back - this year all little Ashwin wants, 
               No Pokémon cards, no candy, nothing else for Christmas.


                                          December 5, 2021
                        For "Your Funniest Couplet Ever" Contest 
                                   Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 11:14 AM A cute/fun write and picture. If you have your teeth you have it all for Christmas. hahahah  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2021 at 4:26 PM how cute. Hey, isn't Ashwin the name of Anitha's son? Or do you have an Ashwin of your own? Malabika Ray Choudhury December 14, 2021 at 5:39 PM My grandson is Ashwin, Andrea - it’s the name of a Star in the constellation in our tradition. He is cute, and a math wizard! Thanks for dropping by. Love ~ Mala

Marikate Kingston December 6, 2021 at 7:10 PM Hopefully no cavities in that cute mouth! Tee hee.

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2021 at 3:02 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Cute picture to go along with the work. I can remember way back when my teeth came out, but I did not want teeth for Christmas. LOL.. Sara

Valsa George December 5, 2021 at 6:16 PM Next Christmas, he can celebrate in all excitement with his full set of new teeth! The image and and the poem make me smile ! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 5, 2021 at 6:22 PM Thanks, Valsa. He himself emailed me telling that's the only thing he wants this Christmas!

Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2021 at 10:48 AM Hello Mala, well I do hope that Ashwin getd his two front teeth. Love & Friendship Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu December 6, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Mala, I hope he does. Love & Friendship, Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury December 5, 2021 at 10:53 AM Thanks, Darlene. Ashwin is hoping to get them back soon.

Victor Buhagiar December 5, 2021 at 8:17 AM Poor Ashwin. But normally they will grow again. Victor Malabika Ray Choudhury December 5, 2021 at 10:52 AM Thanks, Victor. He is really sad!