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Missing Teeth

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Two front missing teeth back - this year all little Ashwin wants, No Pokémon cards, no candy, nothing else for Christmas. December 5, 2021 For "Your Funniest Couplet Ever" Contest Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 11:14:00 AM
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A cute/fun write and picture. If you have your teeth you have it all for Christmas. hahahah  Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/14/2021 4:26:00 PM
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how cute. Hey, isn't Ashwin the name of Anitha's son? Or do you have an Ashwin of your own?
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 5:39:00 PM
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My grandson is Ashwin, Andrea - it’s the name of a Star in the constellation in our tradition. He is cute, and a math wizard! Thanks for dropping by. Love ~ Mala
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 12/6/2021 7:10:00 PM
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Hopefully no cavities in that cute mouth! Tee hee.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2021 3:02:00 AM
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Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Cute picture to go along with the work. I can remember way back when my teeth came out, but I did not want teeth for Christmas. LOL.. Sara
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Valsa George
Date: 12/5/2021 6:16:00 PM
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Next Christmas, he can celebrate in all excitement with his full set of new teeth! The image and and the poem make me smile !
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2021 6:22:00 PM
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Thanks, Valsa. He himself emailed me telling that's the only thing he wants this Christmas!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/5/2021 10:48:00 AM
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Hello Mala, well I do hope that Ashwin getd his two front teeth. Love & Friendship Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/6/2021 12:06:00 PM
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Hello Mala, I hope he does. Love & Friendship, Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2021 10:53:00 AM
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Thanks, Darlene. Ashwin is hoping to get them back soon.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/5/2021 8:17:00 AM
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Poor Ashwin. But normally they will grow again. Victor
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2021 10:52:00 AM
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Thanks, Victor. He is really sad!

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