Missing Nana

I'm in the decade before the decade
she left the world, and my world....

The world did not mark it,
the world did not miss her 
(any more than it will miss me)
but my world does--my world of
sun-gold and ocean-blue, my own
little world reading books while 
sitting like a happy little king on
the porch of my grandparents' old
house on the bay at Ocean City....

I read in gentle sunshine, I read 
while breathing pure ocean air
and sometimes smelling a cake
baking in Nana's kitchen and
knowing I was safe, sure, alive....

I'm in the decade before the decade
my Nana left the world, and as I near
the time when--God willing-- I'll be 
with her again as the 40 odd years since 
she left my world compress: smaller and
smaller time itself becomes, and freer
and freer is my once lost soul....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/1/2022 10:23:00 AM
So beautiful LJ! Your image of the baking cake sent me straight into the memories of my grandmother's pies! I'll bet it was chocolate! Her cake is truly a metaphor for so many things in life like your feeling of safety, security, love, family, summer and the tender love of a grandmother! Wonderfully done! Perhaps I'll bake a chocolate cake today. Blessings my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/8/2022 5:29:00 AM
Actually Sam, Nana's pies were always made with fruit, but her cakes were chocolate!
Date: 8/20/2022 6:18:00 AM
Nana, the hero. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/8/2022 5:29:00 AM
Thanks, C.A. Sorry about the slwo response--was away.
Date: 3/20/2022 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/21/2022 10:43:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/13/2022 1:55:00 PM
L.J. Congratulations on your win. A lovely tribute to your Nana and to all our grandparents who nurtured us through our childhoods~we miss them even now as growing older adults. Truly a heartfelt poem. :)Paulette
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/14/2022 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Paulette!
Date: 1/13/2022 11:21:00 AM
LJ your fresh and creative wording brought my experiences with my Grandmother back with the wonderful vehemence of a slamming door! In the summer, at my grandparents summer home, she and I would pick blackberries from a tangled briar patch and she would bake a blackberry pie. This is beyond delightful. High fives and kudos!!! Sending you joy for each day of the new year! Blessings!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/14/2022 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Sam-- and have blessed 2022!!!
Date: 6/24/2021 1:02:00 AM
Great memories. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/24/2021 10:46:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/7/2020 10:38:00 AM
Those memories would always make you feel close to her in this world. Congratulations on your win L. J.! Blessings :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2020 12:40:00 PM
Yes, I do, and I hope and pray to be close to her and all those I love in the next world...thank you Aditi for your always kind and thoughtful comments!
Date: 7/5/2020 3:35:00 PM
Lovely words. God bless you and I appreciate your entering.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/6/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Regina
Date: 2/22/2020 10:53:00 AM
LJ, great entry and congratulations _Constance
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for the great honor!
Date: 2/19/2020 10:00:00 PM
Hi LJ! Congratulations on your win! So many things in life remind me of my grandmother and her influnces in my life. Your faith is so evident and so beautiful!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/20/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks again Sam-- lucky we are to have had such loving 'abuelas'-- Spanish for grandmother and one of the most beautiful sounding words I know.
Date: 12/25/2019 1:25:00 PM
I know EXACTLY how you feel, LJ. You wrote this for me. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/26/2019 9:49:00 AM
I'm happy I did! The finest love is always a gift, freely given, no strings-- like God's-- I deeply hope-- and may you and yours have a blessed 2020, Line-- and thanks for your poet's friendship.
Date: 11/16/2019 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations L. J. on your honorable mention win in the "I sense tomorrow is the future" contest. I appreciated the realization that the loss you feel now for Nana will be coming your way, strong work, thanks for joining.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/20/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, I very much appreciate it.
Date: 10/25/2019 6:21:00 PM
What a beautiful, touching poem, L.J.! Janice
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/26/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Janice-- I'm glad it meant something to you.
Date: 10/22/2019 6:09:00 PM
I really really like this!! I can see why you would consider it your best.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/23/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea
Date: 10/6/2019 9:19:00 AM
Lovely poem, LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/7/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I'm glad you liked it
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