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Charles Messina

Missing My Grandparents

as the soft wind blows 
outside on the deck chairs rock... 
their presence is felt 


Writing Challenge 3-March 2019 
Senryu Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Dear Heart
3-19-2019

Copyright © Charles Messina | Year Posted 2019

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March 24, 2019 at 5:00 AM

Heartfelt and delicate, very nicely written, my friend.

Panagiota Romios

March 21, 2019 at 5:31 AM

Hey Charles! Great poem. Here's some Chisnti to celebrate..-)) Love, Panagiota

March 20, 2019 at 6:58 PM

Charles, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Charles Messina

March 20, 2019 at 7:28 PM

Thank you, Eve :) hugs ~ *

Constance La France

March 20, 2019 at 4:55 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great Senryu ~

Charles Messina

March 20, 2019 at 7:29 PM

Thank you so much, Constance :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2019 at 2:40 PM

- Congratulations on your great win, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

March 20, 2019 at 7:29 PM

Thank you, Anna-Lise hug // Charlie :)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

March 20, 2019 at 7:13 AM

Sentimental beauty.

Charles Messina

March 20, 2019 at 7:30 PM

Thank you, Vickie :)

March 19, 2019 at 5:59 PM

I felt this - very nice! CayCay

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:53 PM

Thank you, CayCay :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 19, 2019 at 5:05 PM

The title was very helpful in us knowing they were your grandparents. Great nostalgia.

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I had a few ideas for the title but this one fit the best. :)

March 19, 2019 at 10:50 AM

enjoyed the subliminal tone of your piece, charles; wow!...huggs

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:56 PM

Thank you, Nette. Always nice to see your lovely comments. huggs :)

March 19, 2019 at 9:41 AM

I can understand this. Very good Charles.

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:56 PM

Thank you, James. And thanks for you visit too!

March 19, 2019 at 9:34 AM

Lovely nostalgic feeling, Charles.

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:57 PM

Thank you my dear friend, Line.

Caren Krutsinger

March 19, 2019 at 9:04 AM

Poetic genius, Charles.

Charles Messina

March 19, 2019 at 6:57 PM

Sweet! Thank you, Caren :)

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