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Missing My Grandparents

as the soft wind blows outside on the deck chairs rock... their presence is felt Writing Challenge 3-March 2019 Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor Dear Heart 3-19-2019

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Date: 3/24/2019 5:00:00 AM
Heartfelt and delicate, very nicely written, my friend.
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Date: 3/21/2019 5:31:00 AM
Hey Charles! Great poem. Here's some Chisnti to celebrate..-)) Love, Panagiota
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Date: 3/20/2019 6:58:00 PM
Charles, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :) hugs ~ *
Date: 3/20/2019 4:55:00 PM
Charlie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great Senryu ~
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance :)
Date: 3/20/2019 2:40:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, Anna-Lise hug // Charlie :)
Date: 3/20/2019 7:13:00 AM
Sentimental beauty.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/20/2019 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Vickie :)
Date: 3/19/2019 5:59:00 PM
I felt this - very nice! CayCay
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay :)
Date: 3/19/2019 5:05:00 PM
The title was very helpful in us knowing they were your grandparents. Great nostalgia.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I had a few ideas for the title but this one fit the best. :)
Date: 3/19/2019 10:50:00 AM
enjoyed the subliminal tone of your piece, charles; wow!...huggs
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. Always nice to see your lovely comments. huggs :)
Date: 3/19/2019 9:41:00 AM
I can understand this. Very good Charles.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, James. And thanks for you visit too!
Date: 3/19/2019 9:34:00 AM
Lovely nostalgic feeling, Charles.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, Line.
Date: 3/19/2019 9:04:00 AM
Poetic genius, Charles.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/19/2019 6:57:00 PM
Sweet! Thank you, Caren :)

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