Missing Her

Missing her As the lonely morn shimmers in ribbons dancing along distant vistas where blushing cloud formations float on breathless breezes and sunrise dreams My thoughts wander through the long shadows forming of maple tree embraces, when again the silent dawn finds we are apart And my heartbeat echoes upon a sighing horizon, illuminating pastel sorrows, tearfully greeting another day of missing her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Sums up my life the last few months Chris, although you paint longing and sorrow beautifully with pastel colours my days are all grey, still waiting for my wife to come home!
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 12:39 PM
beautiful but sad Chris i especially love the maple tree embraces:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Lovely in a melancholy way.
Downing  Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Just beautiful!!!! :)
Daniel Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:30 AM
"Blushing cloud formations float on breathless breezes" - when you use such lovely expressions in your sad poems, no wonder your happy poems are the best, Chris:):)
Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:23 AM
So, you continue to write "poetry" using a paint brush for a pen. My heart rate slowed and my respiration with it as I took a second walk along this lonely path.
Gentile Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:07 AM
This is so beautiful Chris, I can really feel it.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 7:44 AM
"sighing horizon" damn you're good ;) hugs dear poet xomo
White Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 7:27 AM
You write sadness and missing with such beautiful imagery my friend. And so many metaphors in nature for longing and hurt...
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