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Missing Halloween


Oh, how I miss those happy days
   on Halloween when kids came 'round;
their twinkling eyes danced in the maze
   at our front door where treats were found.

With lifted bags held up to hold
   delicious sweets we put inside,
and with no care, if it was cold,
   from house to house they'd walk allied.

Oh, how I miss those happy days!
   None live in neighborhood...and too,
grandkids outgrew this childhood phase...
   to 'trick or treat' have said adieu.

So now we ride the streets to see
   huge spiders, witches, pumpkin lights,  
the kids costumed creatively...
   nice memories of past delights.

Yet, Moon above with eerie glow
   and ghost-like swaying trees reveal
a haunted feel which makes us know
   that Halloween remains so real.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Halloween
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged:11/01/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Canerdy Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 3:48 PM
I REALLY I really like this, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Eastman Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations! Loved it!
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much, Carol! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:09 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in the Halloween contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Halloween is something we didn't celebrate growing up but I can understand why you miss seeing the little ones at your door now:-) lovely memories congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:56 PM
We did have 7 kids this year! Yes, we do miss the good old days! Thanks for your nice comment and congrats, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win with this wonderfully penned poem ~
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win . I too miss those safe days and making my son's their costumes :-) Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for another great contest and for my nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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October 23, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Sandra, I think you share my love for Halloween as well as the sadness it brings when children don't trick-or-treat in our neighborhoods. I buy the candy each year and end up adding a couple pounds. Driving through the streets to see the children is a good idea. Really enjoyed this heartfelt poem.
Haight Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Nice to read you understand how this feels, Carolyn. Yes, we have the leftover candy predicament also not knowing for sure if that doorbell will ring! Thank you for your supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:16 AM
- Many pleasant memories .... Halloween is still "little new" in Norway - In my childhood, no Halloween - GL in the contest, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for stopping by with your nice comment and good luck wishes for the contest. Much appreciated!
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