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Missing Boyet Ld

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Written : June 2, 2023 11.40pm

When I was young, I named my doll Boyet I played with him from sunrise to sunset We’d some souvenir photos together He was my precious gift from my godmother. Our photo was framed and displayed at home Showing his bald head, no need to comb My mom had stitched tiny clothes for him Along with mine, we were both looking prim. One day, I played at the shore with my neighbors Then built a small coconut hut far from the harbor I brought Boyet for our role-play as a family We slept there overnight with my dog, Willy. Before dawn, an expected storm came We all ran back home like a racing game We left our toys and tools in our play house Including Boyet wrapped in my old blouse. When we returned the following day Unimaginable wreckage was on display Boyet got lost along with my playmates’ dolls I cried out loud scaring all the seagulls.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 7/21/2023 2:20:00 PM

Really enjoyed this poem Len although it is sad with your past loss of a much loved doll(companion) We can all relate to this. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes

Len Gasun
Date: 7/22/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always. Warm wishes to and much welcome dear.

Valsa George

Date: 7/16/2023 9:35:00 PM

So sorry for your loss......Len :) I am sure it is fictional. But you have described it in such a realistic way that it sounds so very possible. Beautiful rhyming and nice ending. I can imagine the intensity of your loss that through your cry even seagulls were made to fly away in scare. Congratulations on your win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/16/2023 8:52:00 AM

"I cried out loud scaring all the seagulls" - great childhood experience. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2023 9:10:00 PM

Pets are so affectionate and the give us peace. To lose a pet is heart breaking, which I don’t know what I would do if I lost my dog. Well done verse with imagery, action, and feelings. Love it.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/3/2023 10:09:00 PM

He is not a dog my dear poet friend. He is a doll. My favorite doll when I was young and got lost. Thank you so much for reading my poem, loving it and your words of encouragements. Blessings to you always.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/2/2023 4:53:00 PM

So sad, Len, to lose such a wonderful playmate and friend. RIP Boyet. Thanks for sharing from your childhood, my friend. Personal poems are enjoyable to read so we get to know others better. Have a great July! Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 7/3/2023 10:06:00 PM

He was my favorite doll my dear poet friend but lost after the storm in the beach where we played. We just live along Namagyan Beach. Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting comment. You're welcome and I thank you too my dear poet friend. Hugs. Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/2/2023 11:36:00 AM

A sad poem Len, but so well written. Memories are forever. As we grow up we find other interests,

Len Gasun
Date: 7/3/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting message my dear poet friend Victor. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 7/2/2023 10:37:00 AM

Poem written inspired by my true childhood life story ---As I tried to wake my muse I've exceeded the required stanzas. I'll probably add the other 2 after the contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/16/2023 9:16:00 PM

The Lost Doll Contest Judged: 7/16/2023 6:01:00 AM Sponsored by: Charles Messina Place 2 : ( up to 2nd place multi-w and 3rd single w)