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Missing

He left without leaving a note..... His mother is still waiting hoping, praying one day he will return Bite Size Poem No 27 Poetry Contest Sponsor Line Gauthier 11/23/21
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:41 PM
So sad. This made me feel a loss.
Horne Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:45 PM
oh, such a sad one here, my friend
Leffanta Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Enjoyed, but many of the homeless vets are too ashamed of their conduct to ever face their mother . . . .
Daniel Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Oh! quite a painful image you leave behind, Jan, powerful:)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:20 PM
Must have a broken heart. Too much egoism in this world. Hugs.
Skelly Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Succinct and to the point, I like this very much...Delice
Calasibetta Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Jan, a beautifully penned piece, I can feel the sadness. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 4:49 PM
Very powerful Jan. I can feel it. Well written :)
Rose  Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:59 PM
wow, that is powerful emotions penned, My granny her son disappeared at 15 , when the soldiers left Italy , he left with them, she thought he was dead until her re appeared 10 years later, a grown man, She passed out from the shock, true story, :(
Ball Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:30 PM
WoW! A very deeply moving piece. It has happened a lot. Some were surprised and worried that something had happened to him. Other not surprised but disappointed that he wasn't man enough to say goodbye. My mother-in-law's father did that to her and her mother. Went out for cigarettes and never returned. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:36 PM
oh gosh so sad you can relate to it within your family:-( hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:11 PM
very poignant, jan! it reminded me of the beatles' song "she's leaving home," although in that case, she did leave a note. perfect match to the picture...
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Ilene , oh that is such a wonderful piece of music, I read an article on missing children who just walked out of the door and seemed to vanish without trace, hugs Jan xx
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