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Misshapen Countenance

earth turned bald. skyscrapers loom bold. waste hideously piled. toxins profusely spilled. nature cruelly defiled. we stand greatly appalled! April. 4. 2023 Bite Size Poem.No.61. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/4/2023 12:57:00 PM
Great job on describing this hideous problem man has created.
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Date: 4/4/2023 12:13:00 PM
Valsa, your poetry is very beautiful; thank you for sharing it with us. Wonderful awakening message. Our treatment of the natural world is deplorable, to say the least.
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Date: 4/4/2023 10:40:00 AM
Valsa I love your poem. You have hit one of my angry buttons. It is disgusting to me, this thing we call progress.
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Date: 4/4/2023 6:50:00 AM
Great awakening poem to seek better: )
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Date: 4/4/2023 1:46:00 AM
Our behaviour towards nature is appalling indeed, Valsa:)
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