Kj Force Poet Light Verse

Miss Springs Seedy Side

Miss Spring arrived quite early today...
She brought with her some rain..Hooray...
Her job description is to assure...
That the garden will endure...
All the habitants needed...
And even the seeded....
Her first assignment of her duties..
Will be to match up all the cuties..
Like Azaleas , Iris, Pansies and more... 
a Rose with a Rose...and even more...
A home for everything, even Anthills...
Right next to the bright yellow Daffodils...
However even the flowers have rebels who seek,
Pleasures that are.. that of the weak...
And sometimes it is beyond  Miss Springs grasp..
That “ new” faces show up...with no names..Alas !
You hear them in whispers..when the wind blows threw the grass...
They are the “ love childs” produced by the rebels you see...
 they are called “ Wildflowers “ and picked by both you and me...
But, it’s not here where the story ends...
Cause even Miss Spring has a “ seedy “ side my friends...
And as the months pass...she too changes..
Sometimes even exchanges..
And sells herself out..what a bummer..
She gets “ hotter “ and changes her name...to Summer

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Jerry Bolton May 16, 2015 at 12:20 PM Yes, the bitch does change into summer. Bad news for people such as I who are old and have lung problems trying to breath in the scorching heat, never mind the dammed humidity. You penned it nicely. Kj Force May 16, 2015 at 4:45 PM Thanks for visiting...sorry you suffer from COPD..but that's why there is air-conditioning...and you may qualify for an O2 machine..hubby uses one ( in between cig breaks ) DUH...I know another DUH...glad you liked the poem...and thanks for the compliment..kj

Delysia Hendricks November 23, 2013 at 4:27 AM Hahaha. Go "rebel"; go "seedy"; go "hot"!!! You've got the gift, girlfriend. I don't say this lightly. I plan to go through each of your writes and I know I'll enjoy the lot. Good going, Ms Entertainer. Licia :-) Kj Force November 23, 2013 at 5:10 AM delysia...I am so glad you enjoy my writes...I am so honored when someone steps into my world of words. have a great week-end...look forward to hearing your thoughts .

Jon A Cavanaugh October 26, 2013 at 10:50 PM Love your poem. My mother loves wildflowers. She even plants the ones that don't show up on there own. How the neighbors must love my mom. But really, they do. You've stirred my memory and I thank you for that. Thank you for sharing. Kj Force October 27, 2013 at 12:04 AM Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment.. Hopefully you will read " wildflowers " another poem I wrote on how they got their name..

Robin Davis October 7, 2013 at 9:07 PM This is a very creative and imaginative write. The reader is taken on a journey with your imagery and feeling. nice job Kj Force October 7, 2013 at 9:59 PM Thank you very much for the compliment.

Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2013 at 6:19 PM wow, I just loved the personification in this one, and use of "seedy" side. What a great way to write of our lovely wildflowers of spring. Kj Force October 7, 2013 at 8:52 PM thank you so much for visiting and commenting, glad you enjoyed it..Hopefully you will enjoy my poem " Wildflowers "

Suzanne Delaney October 7, 2013 at 4:58 PM This flows so nicely and kept me intrigued to the end. Welcome to Poetry Soup...you will love it here. SuZ Kj Force October 7, 2013 at 8:53 PM Thank you for the lovely welcome and comment. kj

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu October 7, 2013 at 4:02 AM Well written and nicely expressed. Love your style and choice of words. Welcome to poetry soup,this a family you can call your own. Wishing you the best. Baron Of Ebullion Kj Force October 7, 2013 at 8:54 PM Thank you again for reading my poem and the critique, very much appreciated...