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Miss So and So

She’s so neg neurodegenerative, so womb retro Neanderthal Her backward moving bellow decisions aren’t thoroughly modern mellow Got lip kicker high heels that testosterone neuter kills Miss So and So loves to cold-heartedly iron cast her anvil anger with dragon breath death blows She’s so con method constrictive, so anaconda pocket squeeze avarice addictive Those boa belly estrogen rolls always take their masculine squeal toll Her every hip sway diamondback pulse suggestion is cobra hardwired for a vow recoil bosom confession Miss No Good So and So is a sultry eyelash she-devil Delivering a bottomless pit of insomnia pain everywhere she pillow goes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 10/19/2019 11:21:00 AM
Ty, John, and the rest of you talented poetesses and poets for your much appreciated muse comments. Here's a peek under the ole noggin': Fer instance, I want to say "hard-hearted," so I ink dip say, "Diamondback pulse." That has the lethal right metaphorical bite. lol! Love and joy always to everyone at PSoup.
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:39:00 AM
Freddies back....with another awesome write, your creativity is off the charts with this one, welcome back!
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Date: 10/10/2019 7:24:00 AM
Love it, Freddie, especially the line about the anaconda and how your lines wrap around each other in a snakey way. Well done, brother.
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Date: 9/23/2019 11:53:00 AM
"everywhere she pillow goes" I like the way you said it here..."Miss So and So loves to cold-heartedly iron cast her anvil anger with dragon breath death blows" A tough girl ain't she....
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:15:00 AM
Wow this is tactfully written and powerful as usual Freddie! Well done :)
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Date: 9/22/2019 1:27:00 AM
Welcome back and thanks for adding your brand of delicious.
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Date: 9/21/2019 3:15:00 PM
Ahhh Freddie it is good to see your poetry is still as wonderful as ever!;)
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Date: 9/21/2019 1:03:00 PM
I absolutely love this ! Amazing descriptions :-) x
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