Miss Priscilla

Disheveled hair, wiry and gray
 an old lady hovered past my house each day.
I ignored her when she passed by
 wondering what possessed her as I sighed
then in my own focused diligence
 I slinked fast away, uncaring in my ignorance.
Wasn't sure where she lived but wondered
 why in the world she seemed so encumbered.
Then one day when a little cold set in
 I stepped outside my homey bin
and there lay bird wings on my mat
 and slipped away some stray gray tabby cat.
Then as I queried in my beleaguered mind
 that old lady waved, not surprised as to what I was to find.
There along the shade of the door's edge
 just below the fully defined hedge
lay the gathering of leaves and  papers torn
 five kittens hiding unseen and newly born.
The old lady grinned, scooped them up and smiled 
 their mine she said as if they were her own child.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Tracy Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Touching storyline with her adopted fur babies! Congrats on your win and best wishes!
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Congrats. Lovely spin on your winner of a poem. Thanks for entering my contest, DM.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 6:32 PM
This winning poem is quite touching . Congrats to you.
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Dropping back with my congrats DM:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Well done DM, congratulations...
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 3:25 PM
What a lovely poem and it shows we can be so busy going about our daily lives we can miss what is there right before our very eyes and Miss Priscila surprised us all at the end :-) hugs jan x
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