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Miss Lucy

She was locked away in the chest, among so many treasured things
The fragrant scent of cedar, holds a thousand memories
Tucked beside my mother's dress, and the box with grandma's ring
She was gently wrapped in tissue, and holds my childhood dreams 

To hold once more sweet Miss Lucy, this treasured Christmas doll
would seem as if she's sleeping, with her ringlets shining gold
My favorite doll from childhood, where childhood still unfolds
I could whisper all my secrets, her expression never changed
She would offer reassurance, and today it feels the same

With her composition face, eyes cobalt blue
She might look a bit ragged....but perhaps you would too
If you'd been lost in the rain, or left out in the yard
Or tossed in the back seat of Daddy's old car
She was dragged by one foot, while I sucked on my thumb
Was chewed by our dog....and got sticky with gum

I would cry when once I lost her...and would sob through long dark nights
But by daylight we would find her, a bit soggy, but all right
Poor Lucy has had her troubles, has gone through many trials
One eye is stuck, her ribbons gone...but she still has a smile
Some hair strands may be missing, but what matters most to me
I still have precious Lucy....and is beautiful to me

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For Eve Roper's Contest "Oil Paintings 1-2-3" 
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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Poetry like this wonderful work inspires and touches the heart Carrie. Congratulations on you much deserving win!
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Another lovely and creative interpretation, Carrie! Memories should be for keeps; they are too sweet to be lost along the passage of time! Congratulations on placing first! // paul
Scars Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Wonderful..Congrats on your win Carrie...-Lu xxx *smiles*
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:42 AM
I so enjoyed your story, congratulations. I see we did the same painting.
Kimathi Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Congrats for your beautiful, winning write Carrie! ;-)
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Thank you so very much for submitting this beautiful poem in my contest, Carrie,congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
A  Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Congratulations Carrie
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 6:39 PM
absolutely charming Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Jerden Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Loved it. Didn't quite hit the mark for the Kintsukuroi contest as there was no repair done. Thanks for participating.
Henderson Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 8:57 PM
I especially liked this, Carrie. Good one. Charles
Dillard Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations, it should have been. I'm blaming the mistake on my iPad! I hope it doesn't retaliate... RAY
Dillard Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Such a nice childhood memory! Much like my little squirt gun.....only much more pleasant. Contests to you for your win! RAY
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:13 PM
This was wonderful memory to write about Carrie your so lucky to still have your treasured Lucy.Well deserved 1st.place win.~Teresa~
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Rucker Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 8:26 AM
What a beautiful poem, well done. It makes me think back to those toys I owned, none of which I still have, you are lucky to have Miss Lucy.
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on the firstb place win in the contest of Linda, carrie
Duffin Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved No 1. Eamon
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:21 AM
applause to you and lucy on your win , carrie! :) nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 9:50 PM
She sounds like a wonderful doll, Carrie. Congrats on your BIG win!! LUv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Yes some toys do hold a very special position in our hearts, Many congratulations for this success.
La France Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:20 PM
Well it does seem we both treasure those dolls held within ches~ memories of "childhood"~ congrats to you Carrie, I am so proud to hold first place with you ~~
Pettit Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:12 PM
If the late Elvis Presley were an English major, he would have been singing "You aren't anything but a hound dog". Somehow, that doesn't sound quite right. In the first line of the fourth verse, "drug" should have been replaced with "dragged". The verb "drug" means to introduce a substance into a living organism to alter its physiology. However, you won and that's what counts the most. Congratulations!
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:15 PM
yup a wonder and a marvel what we have all come to expect from our #1 gal. Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:01 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Toyland contest.. my winners list just posted tonight luv..
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