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Weekly Poetry Challenge

06.07.2026
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Miss Gunda -


Gunda is a robot vacuum cleaner
a skilful dust gleaner

makes no sound
just going round and round
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Gasun Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:36 AM
I immensely enjoyed this delightdul couplet my dear poet friend Anne-lise! Thanks for sharing and your lovely visit. Best wishes always. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 12:27 PM
I like this description of those robotic vacs, Anne-Lise. It was nice but when the battery goes and has to be replaced it is almost like buying another one. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:37 PM
she's a dizzy, ditzy one :-)
Rolland Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 7:41 AM
would not buy such a robot, vacuum cleaner is good for health, like sport, we need so much to move, what a wonderful poem my friend
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 12:21 PM
- When Miss Gunda vacuums, I go for a long walk with my dogs ... finished when I get home ... she is excellent, Yann :) - hugs
Gibbons Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 5:00 AM
Hey Anne- Lise this is awesome you sell it well ;) I want one I have 2 dogs too. But this fun couplet rocks <3 hugs my friend x
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 12:23 PM
- Especially recommended when you have fibromyalgia (and dogs :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 1:54 AM
My daughter has one of those. It works perfectly.
Kitchin Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 4:06 PM
Anne-Lise, a fun poem. I have always wanted one of those vacuums but have too many nooks and crannies in my home for it to vacuum. Best in the writing challenge.
DiMino Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 11:44 AM
Ah, make one that looks good in a French Maid's Skirt, and I'll order 2. Nicely done, Anne.
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 2:12 AM
:)))
Cunningham Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Lol,it's getting to the stage where we won't have to get out of bed and we'll be able to control everything on an app from our phones. Tom
Poet Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 6:24 AM
Thanks for the smile, Anne-Lise. I like how you penned it.
M  Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Ha this made me smile as we have one it was a gift ….we've called it Roger! We haven't quite mastered the art yet being newbies but once we do l know Roger will be another treasured member of our family! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 12:27 PM
"Miss Gunda" is a creative/fun write. I enjoyed reading. Love the cute/fun picture. I need one. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away............
Bauer Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 11:59 AM
wish i had one of those, anne-lise! i like the way you've described this...
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 12:14 PM
- Today these cost less than a regular old-fashioned vacuum cleaner ... Gunda walks all over the house every day ... (when you have 2 dogs it's necessary :) - Thanks for reading, Ilene :) - hugs
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